While I wanted nothing more than to escape the city I couldn’t afford to make any mistakes. I was behind enemy lines and held the terrain disadvantage. Regardless of the power I wield, it won’t do me much good if I can’t hit anything. I took stock of my possessions as I hid in some bushes near the entrance of the gardens.
I had my Levin sword strapped to my waist, ready to see action at a moment’s notice. The only problem, however, is that its magic was severely drained. I scowled in frustration as I sensed the magic held within the blade had only enough energy for a single bolt. I can wield a blade and use it well, but it would do me little good in my current situation since most of the guard use spears. That, and things tend to die when you cut them. I don’t want to kill anyone.
I opened my robe to find four tomes I had nestled against the fabric, each secured in place by a strap. I had a tome of Elfire, a tome of Arcwind a tome of Rexcalibur and a tome of Elthunder. I placed my hand against each of the books and reached out with my magic. I was happy to find that, unlike the Levin sword, the magic within the tomes remained unchanged.
I took Arcwind from its position and opened it, feeling the breeze around me strengthen. I flipped through the pages, reading the ancient language I used to empower them. Unlike most unicorns, whose magic is mainly used as a utility, my magic is used as a weapon. I had no access to invisibility spells or support magic. What I did have though, was ingenuity.
Long ago before my imprisonment I realized the flaw with my magic. I couldn’t always rely on brute power to see my way through problems. So, through trial and error, I was able to bend my magic slightly to aid me in other ways. Arcwind alone allows me to cut my enemy with razor sharp winds, but by letting the wind carry me, however, I am able to significantly increase my speed. I had also discovered that by using small bursts of Thunder magic I am able to re-direct the spell of a unicorn; useful for one-on-one duels.
I closed the book and looked out towards the entrance of the gardens. Two guards were stationed on either side of the gate. I bit the inside of my cheek, thinking of a way to remove them. Elthunder would certainly do the trick, but the noise might cause some unwanted attention. If only I had Nosferatu…
I sighed and took Elthunder from its position. I needed to use enough power to render both guards unconscious, but not so much that it could kill them. I opened the book and quickly read over the ancient language needed for the spell. With the words fresh in my mind and a flourish of my hand I called upon the power within the tomb.
The ponies didn’t stand a chance as two bolts struck them from above; the gold armor allowing the electricity to flow through their bodies. Within seconds both guards collapsed into a twitching mess.
I rose from the bushes and quickly made my way towards the city, securing Elthunder back under my robe. I didn’t bother to check to see if my spell had done any harm to the guards. The lightning had been both visible and loud; no doubt others would have been alerted by now.
It didn’t take long to reach the streets of Canterlot, the cobbled roads blending nicely with the mostly stone homes. While it would have been nice to stop and admire the architecture, I was a bit preoccupied with a few dozen terrified eyes pointed in my direction. I smiled softly and tried to relax my body, hoping the skittish ponies would notice and relax as well.
More than a few seemed to notice the visible change. I watched as about a quarter of the crowd disperses, leaving me with a still decent number of terrified ponies. I reached into my robe and took hold of Rexcalibur, noticing many of the citizens backing up in fright. When they saw the book, however, the atmosphere almost immediately changed. The fear was still there, but it was buried beneath a layer of curiosity.
With my nose in the book I began to walk through the streets. The ponies parted for me like Moses and the Red Sea. All I needed to do was get to the gates without incident. Once out of the city I could make my way to the Everfree forest. I needed to check up on my outposts and home. Hopefully it wouldn’t be too much of a mess to clean up. I’ve missed 1500 ‘spring cleanings’ so I didn’t let my hopes get too high.
“Halt creature!”
I sighed in resignation. I expected to be called out on, but I was hoping it would have been from the guards at the main gate. I was already half way to the gate, hell I could see it from here. I pivoted on my heels, noticing a small group of soldiers making their way towards me. I returned my attention to the tome, finishing the last bit of reading.
Apparently the guard that spoke took offense to the lack of attention. His face grew red in anger as he leveled his spear in my direction. “Creature, as a sergeant of the royal guard I demand your attention!”
Well… it seems the guard has grown arrogant during my time of absence. It used to take a lot more than reading to get a reaction, let alone anger them. I closed my book and held it under my arm, gazing down at the soldier with a warm smile.
“I apologize, I just get lost in my books so often. Do you enjoy reading sergeant?”
My sudden question coupled with my causal easygoing tone took the guard by surprise. Years of training, however, allowed him to quickly recompose himself. His eyes softened and he lowered the head of his spear. “Creature, I’m sorry for the inconvenience, but I’m afraid I’ll have to ask you to come with us.”
I shook my head sadly, putting forth a worried visage. “I’m sorry sergeant, but I have an important meeting I must attend to. I can’t afford to be late so I’m afraid I must bid you good day.”
With that said I turned on my heels and continued to walk towards the entrance of the city, stunning both the guards and the nearby citizens. Nopony has ever gone against the guard before, let alone done so in such a casual way.
The sergeant spoke to one of the privates, his eyes boring into the back of my head. “Private, let the princesses know abou-”
He was unable to finish his command as ice suddenly erupted from the ground, encasing the pony and rending him immobile. The other guards backed up in surprise as the surrounding ponies screamed in fear. Panicked civilians ran in random directions like a chicken that had lost its head. With the street clear, all that was left were the guard and I, leaving little to wonder who the assailant was. The guards turned towards me, spears pointed at my chest as they prepared to fight the unknown creature.
The blue tome in my palm faintly glowed. Wisps of cold air flowed around me as the ground frosted over. My eyes glow a faint purple as I looked over the remaining guard, seeing the fear and determination on their faces. My smile never once wavered.
“White moves first.”
Celestia was enjoying her time at the party, eating a slice of cake as she watched her little ponies congratulate the six mares who had saved Equestria once again. Discord had caused a lot of trouble, but the power of friendship had once more saved the day. She returned her gaze to the confectionary delight, a feral look to her eyes as she prepared to assault the sweet.
She never got her chance as the doors to the throne room swung open. A lone guard rushed towards Celestia, a look of panic on his face.
“Your highness, there is a creature terrorizing the city and attacking the guard!” He reported, giving a quick salute in the process.
Celestia quickly grew serious, her smile disappearing into a thin line.
“What description can you give me of this creature?” she asked.
His response was haggard, “We are unsure as to what creature it is, but it is bipedal and without fur. It is also capable of using highly advanced magic!”
Celestia’s eyes hardened and she immediately rose from her seat, the cake already forgotten.
“Send word to my sister to join me at the front of the castle with the Elements of Harmony. Ensure that the guard holds off the creature for as long as possible until I arrive.”
The soldier saluted and quickly left the throne room to fulfill his ruler’s commands.
Celestia looked over her little pony’s faces, seeing confusion and fear the dominant reaction. She noticed the six mares among them as they moved through the crowd, Twilight Sparkle leading the group.
Twilight Sparkle, princess Celestia’s student, was currently confused, nervous and curious. She had listened as the guard described a strange creature that was supposedly fighting the guard using powerful magic. She thought back to her books, recalling any article that would fit the description with the one given by the guard. Unable to recall such a being she decided to ask her teacher directly instead.
Twilight gazed upwards towards her leader, the rest of her friends taking position on either side of her. “Princess Celestia, what exactly is going on?”
Celestia rose from her position and motioned for Twilight and her friends to walk with her. “It would seem that another foe of mine has returned from the past.”
Twilight, instantly alert, was ready to list off numerous questions. She never got the chance as Rainbow Dash beat her to it. “Oh come ON! We just defeated that loser Discord and now another lame villain is causing trouble!?”
Twilight was prepared to scold her friend when Celestia intervened. “I understand your frustration Rainbow Dash, but this enemy is far too dangerous for you to confront.”
Rainbow looked insulted as she was told somepony was more dangerous than her, the fastest flyer in Equestria! She was ready to argue this, but Twilight finally spoke up, “With all due respect princess, we just defeated Discord. His chaos magic was extremely powerful. Who could be more dangerous than him?”
Celestia sighed. She suddenly felt like an old mare near the end of her time. She smiled softly as she recalled a memory regarding a young filly that enjoyed studying in the gardens, studying near a very specific statue. “His name is Tactician, a mage of incredible skill and power.”
Twilight faltered in her step, wondering if she misheard her teacher. “T-Tactician!? The one you told me about when I was a filly!?”
Celestia nodded solemnly, not liking the look in the lavender mare’s eyes. The rest of the ponies merely looked to each other in confusion. Applejack cleared her throat, “Do ya think yall can explain who this ere’ Tactician fellow is?”
Twilight gasped and turned on her friend, getting ready to give one of her lectures. “Tactician is a mage who wielded powerful elemental magic some 1500 years ago. He was considered to be one of the smartest individuals in history. He and StarSwirl the Bearded were labeled pioneers in the field of magic!”
Twilight squeed and began speaking aloud to herself. “I need to get several rolls of parchment and bottles of ink! I have so much to ask him! How does he use magic, what species is he, what’s his favorite color!?”
Celestia watched the display with amusement. She found Twilight’s desire for knowledge refreshing, but this was not something she could pursue. She coughed into her hoof, pulling the mare back to reality.
Twilight immediately ended her rambling, scuffing the ground with a hoof. “Sorry!”
“Twilight,” Celestia began, “This is not something you can pursue. Tactician is considered an enemy of the state for a reason. He has committed numerous crimes, one of which alone would sentence him to life in the dungeon.”
Pinkie Pie hopped towards the front of the group. “Pfft, what’s the worse he coul-”
“He used dark magic to bring the dead back to life. He used the corpses as weapons against the royal guard,” Celestia intervened.
The mares stopped in their tracks, looking at Celestia with a mixture of surprise and horror. Twilight seemed to be the most affected. Such magic was unheard of and she felt herself become sick at the thought of defiling the dead in such a way.
The group of ponies moved with new vigor, focusing on intercepting the villain known as Tactician.
I looked over the remaining ten guards as they blocked my only exit. The wooden gate behind them was closed. From the looks the guards were giving me, they intended to keep it that way. Behind me was a path of destruction. The street was littered with pot holes from lightning bolts and numerous guards were encased in ice. Fifty guards had attempted to stop me, none of them succeeded. Ten more were hardly going to make much of a difference.
“Stand aside and open the gate before I decide to get violent.”
None of the guards moved.
I sighed and flicked my right hand upwards. A pillar of fire erupted from the ground behind them. The shockwave that followed blew the gate apart and sent the guards flying. All that remained of the gate were the smoking splinters that littered the ground. I put away Elfire and retrieved Arcwind. I immediately began reading the book, familiarizing myself with the spell.
I grumbled in annoyance as I was forced to switch yet again between tomes. Despite how powerful my magic was it had a major flaw to it. I could only use one tome at a time. The ancient language bound to the tome is what’s needed to cast the magic. Every time a different book is used, the previous bind is broken. The only way to re-invoke the bind is by re-reading the ancient text.
Binding myself to the spell once more I prepared to cast the magic. I wanted to get out of here before-
“TACTICIAN!!!”
I wince as I’m assaulted with a verbal shockwave, forcing myself from covering my ears. I turn around to see the Royal Sisters, the mane six and what looks to be a hundred armed guards behind them. I bit my tongue to keep myself from laughing. Most of them had their ears pressed against the back of their heads.
I turned towards the blue alicorn, my cold eyes betraying my warm smile. “There’s really no need to shout Luna. I’m standing no more than 20 feet from you.”
The guard bristled in annoyance, unhappy that I was speaking to their ruler as such. Luna merely huffed in response as Celestia stepped forward. I noticed she didn’t look at me the same way as she used to. Where her gaze once held hate for me, it seemed to have died down to resignation. Perhaps she finally realized how wrong she was for hunting me.
Celestia cleared her throat before speaking, “Tactician… no, Robin.”
I actually raised my eyebrow at that one. Aside from Luna, the six mares looked towards Celestia with confusion. I guess she never told them my real name. She sounded kind of tired when she spoke my name. Maybe she’ll actually apologize. She’ll stop hunting me down and I can finally-
“For your crimes against pony kind I hereby sentence you to imprisonment,” Celestia finished.
… Or maybe she’s a fat fucking twat who sits on her ass all day doing nothing but eating cake.
I snorted and waved her off. “I haven’t committed any crimes that deserve putting me back in stone or behind bars. If you want to stop me, Celly, then you’re going to have to beat me.”
Oh, now she’s looking at me like I remember; enough rage to shoot lasers out of her eyes. Most of the other ponies had the same look. The cyan Pegasus looked ready to charge at me. Luna actually grinned when I used her sister’s pet name.
Luna stepped forward next to Celestia, her grin morphing into a smirk. “That shouldn’t be too much of a challenge. We defeated thou once before and we shall do so again!”
I don’t know if it was the stress of the situation, the heavy atmosphere or the sheer stupidity of the Alicorns, but I immediately started laughing the moment she finished.
Apparently that wasn’t the response they expected from me. Celestia looked baffled as I gripped my sides, trying to contain my laughter.
“Y-You actually think you defeated me? I let you use the Elements of Harmony on me. I let you think you defeated me. It was all part of my plan.”
Not one of the ponies before me knew what to say to that. Celestia and Luna were dumbfounded, the element bearers had dropped their jaws and the royal guard looked baffled.
I decided I had wasted enough time here. Using the distraction to my advantage I cast Arcwind and allowed the wind to circle my body. The action snapped the ponies out of their stupor.
I left them with one final remark. “If you want to actually have a civil conversation, you’ll find me in the Everfree forest. I’d certainly enjoy a chat with the element bearers.”
I waved my arm in front of me, causing the wind to blow dust and debris into their eyes. By the time they could see again I had already vanished.
Trying to think of some future conflict for the story. on that note, who here approves of this pony -->
5535957 Because their a joke of a monachy, sure if their a noble council they would have one prince or princess but four is just morking the monachy system.
Hey.....not bad....oh my god...this is good! no kidding...best story line ever.
I will say fantastic.
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Thanks! I'm really happy you enjoyed it. I was worried about how well it would be received.
One of these questions just doesn't belong here.
That line was funny.
5539568 I know right? favorite color? It blue. maybe...white.
5539568
It's Twilight, she needs to ask all the questions... all of them.
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ALL OF THEM
5539578 lol
5539609
I need to fulfill that comedy tag somehow!
5539548 I do!!! Also could you hopefully mix in some of the Dresden Files magic system into this story please?
5539615
Well, the point of this crossover is supposed to be Fire Emblem. I don't think it would really fit the displaced theme if I mixed mechanics. The main issue though is that I know nothing about the Dresden Files. Never read the books.
Can't wait to read more :D
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I can't wait to write more! Thinking of doing a flash back next chapter.
5539624 You should
This is getting interesting. I wonder how he and the Mane 6 would interact.
Ok, this is getting interesting. Robin thinks he commited no crimes, Celestia says he raised the dead, Nosferatu is missing, and Twilight is a fangirl of the enemy. I'm guessing Sombra may have had something to do with this.
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It depends on whether or not I include Trixi in the story. I have two different outcomes in mind, but I want to go with Trixi. It would really spice up the story I think.
Twilight has read about Tactician and has listened to the stories of him from the Princess. I'll go into this later, but Celestia never explained to Twilight that Tactician was considered an enemy. She always thought he was just a scholar, someone to look up to. It's one of the reasons she places him up there along with Starswirl the Bearded. Unlike other Equestrian enemies, Celestia admired Robin for his skill and tenacity. She let ponies believe that he was a master of magic and a pioneer of the arts.
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Must... Not... Spoil anything!
Regarding Twilight being a fan girl, refer to my response for Moongaze.
Also, a pet-peeve of mine is adding characters in the story list before they make an appearance. I feel it spoils things for the reader.
k now you get my favorite. Good job.
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Level Up!
Damn, no shipping. Ah well...I'll give it a chance. Tracking, for the time being, though I think I'll rather enjoy this.
5539745
Well, as I mentioned in the main description I'll add characters and tags as I go along. I DO have some ideas for romance, but they are mostly comical in nature. For as smart as Robin is, he doesn't have a lot of tact when confronting other people/ponies.
5539762 S'the biggest reason I gave it a chance. As shallow as it is the vast majority of what I read almost always has to have a romance tag, though every now and then a fic like this will grab my attention. That and fucking Fire Emblem oh god yes.
Also, any eta for the next chapter by chance? ;O
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I enjoy romance, I've written romance before, I could do romance in this story, but it wouldn't be high quality. If I do anything with romance, there will most likely always be a bit of comedy involved.
Hmm... can't really say at the moment. I don't have anything going on today so I'll definitely spend some time writing. I'm a full time college student working part time on the side. School starts for me in a few days. I should be able to get the next chapter out within a day or two, but after that I'm not sure.
5539845 Comedic romance is best romance anyways. ;) I look forward to whatever you decide.
All good - real life has to take precedence. All I ask is that you don't abandon it.
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I will certainly do my best not to. I can see times in the future where I might be stagnant for a month, but that's all.
How will the Princesses deal with the fact that their victory was all apart of his plan?
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Stick around and you'll find out~!
good chapter, but I think that moon could not reclaim anything, this also questions the objectivity of celestia
moon, attempt commit genocide 2 times and still was given a third chance, and just use magic prohibited by moral issues was imprisoned for 1000 years, and though had committed a crime worse there is no room for comparison
by the way, here were published, some interesting ideas
5540121
First of all, Luna is Celestia's sister. There will be bias no matter what. Secondly, Luna attempted genocide. She never actually killed anyone. It could be implied that Discord did based on the show and the mural on the window, but there's no actual proof. I will not go into detail about what Robin did. I don't want to ruin too much of the story.
Those are some interesting ideas. I actually like the idea of my character (Robin) going to the Human and You Universe. I have a few problems with that, however:
1. I wouldn't know what to write. Ideas come and go in my head, but only a few I keep. I wouldn't know where to start with such a story.
2. While I am not new to writing, I am new to writing stories about ponies. I also am not too terribly familiar with FimFiction's functions. I only cared to know the basics before because I simply read.
3. Human and You is not my idea and I feel funny borrowing it without permission. Even if I did get permission, I feel I wouldn't do it justice. I've read the main story and it's done very well. I just don't see myself as a good enough writer to take on that challenge, even if I wanted to.
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eternal night had killed everything on the planet, it is true moon was insane and was not thinking clearly, but that would have been the most likely scenario, and even had had a plan, I doubt that would include other races of the world
that's the point, their lack of objectivity when it comes to someone close.
I think the protagonist after receiving eternal punishment, without any possibility of freedom in the future, I'd be pretty upset with the treatment given to luna just for being his sister.
that point is always neglected in this kind of story and it's not even explored
it's just being sealed in stone when you're a minor threat?
is just be sealed for a thousand years or worse sealed forever, without any possibility of parole?
it's just being tortured forever?
and adding the fact that is a mortal and not a corrupt god, demon, etc
I meant something like this
I have no complaints.
Have a
5539713 Don't worry, just spitbaling here. I demand no answers and will wait for them to be naturally revealed.
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You have just given me my first ever stash. I shall cherish it always!
5542377
You are welcome.
As a Fire Emblem fan, I shall read this.
As a member of the long dead FESS forum, I shall scrutinize the crap out of this.
All in all, looking forward to what I find. forums.grandbell.net/Smileys/default/Arvis.gif
We will watch this Tactician, humans are interesting most often.
One question: where did the blue tome come from?
5543040 Rexcalibur is an Ice Magic, their tomes are blue.
Fire's red, Wind's Green, Thunder is Yellow, Dark magic is Purple. (I think Ice Magic is for the clerics now that I think about it.)
While I doubt this, I hope to see the Fala Flame tome.
Also, a few of your sentence could use better structure, perhaps it editor will help with that.
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Well, I hope my story satisfies the fan inside of you. I don't know what the FESS forum is, but it sounds dangerous! Also, I actually never heard of the Fala Flame tome before. Just looked it up and I can say that the tome will not be making an appearance.
I don't have an editor due to the fact I only recently started getting active on this site. Sure, I've read stories and posted some comments, but I'm trying to get myself out there more now. If you know an editor that would be willing to look over my story, let me know!
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What can I say, we're smart, cunning and usually have no morals
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Rexcalibur is actually considered Wind magic. There is no actual 'Ice Magic' in Fire Emblem. In the story I place it in the category of Wind magic, but call it Ice magic for simplicity's sake.
5543376 There is actually a Blizzard tome in Fire emblem, which is also wind magic.
5547482 5544200 Ah that makes sense.
5544200 I actually get to describe FESS to someone? I never thought I'd see the day.
FESS, or Fire Emblem Sanctuary of Strategy, Is a long dead Forum that was basically the foundation of the Fire Emblem fan base. Member still get together every winter to mess around a bit.
They are also the ones that made all of these smilies I have been using.
Pretty much Everything from every translation patch to the growth tables, and even the translation of the Heron script.
Most of the member went to Serenes Forest after it eventually went down.
I could go into the history of the site, but I won't as I don't like having huge comments.
http://forums.grandbell.net/index.php
http://serenesforest.net/forums/
Also, I can edit a bit for basic sentence structure, or plot things involving various Fire Emblem related things.
forums.grandbell.net/Smileys/default/Knoll.gif
PS: No Fala Flame (Vala Flame)? But the wrath of the sun....
OK, how about these dark tomes; Loptyr (Extremely unlikely but would be awesome.), Dulam or Hell (Also unlikely, but I can think of a few possibilities.), or Yotsmungand (Actually possible, as it is a normal tome.).
5547566
Huh, I never heard of those forums. It's certainly interesting, but I don't think I'll join. I doubt I'll ever keep up with things if I do.
I appreciate your offer to help out editing my story. What I would really find helpful though, is if I can bounce Fire Emblem ideas and mechanics off of you. On that note, what did you think of my hybrid idea for the magic?
Well... I could include the tome. The reason I'm hesitant to add some of these tomes is because I don't really know anything about them (I've looked most of them up before you mentioned them). I never played Fire Emblem: Genealogy of the Holy War so I don't know the history of the tomes. If I want to see the animations and FX then I have to look for videos online. Of the dark tomes you mentioned, the only one I'll most likely use would be Yotsmungand. Instead of Hell or Dulam, I would use Eclipse since it can be wielded by playable characters.
Send me a note if you want to talk a bit more in depth.
5548438 I will happily help you. But I can only really any editing on mu computer at home. As doing any typing on a phone is a pain for me.
And I honestly dont contribute to Serenes much. I just lurk nowadays like an old geezer who can't learn to l et go.
As for the magic, I have a basic grasp of what you did with it, but I will have to reread it to understand fully. I will get back to you on that through a PM.
P.s. What do you mean you never played genealogy of the holy war!? That is like, the best one!
I can send you a link for the animation for it if you once I get home
5553596
It's possible we could do a crossover, but I don't know anything about Jak and Daxter. I'm also not ready at the moment to do a crossover since I need to progress a bit more in my own story. If you want to do a crossover with another displaced story just start a thread in the Displaced forum.
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Yea, school just started up for me again recently. I want to get a few chapters in before starting as well. Also, there's a chance I may do a crossover with shinigamisparda so I have to take that into account.
5532596 I would be glad to crossover with you later on! Later on, because my computer is not working.