Twilight notices that her friends seem to be at one another's throat lately. Fearing that their friendship is ending, Twilight sends a letter to Princess Celestia. The sun princess, in all her wisdom, sees a prime point for teaching her student a "different" lesson about friendship. She then reaches out across the void to a dimension that always seems to be clashing...
Now, Twilight and friends are stuck with five mysterious and destructive creatures who call themselves "Pokémon." Will their friendship survive?
Previously owned by Paton Pendeng
Chapters (5)
This has the shapings of a very good crossover, I believed the arguement could be real, but I don't think Arceus presides over everyone. Correct me if I'm wrong, though!
To be honest since we know so much about Princess Celestia when she enters the room with Arceus you either describe her full way to make a small impression or don't at all.
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He watches, not interferes... and I did say Creators
without the letter it looks really short, and otherwise it seems to be not much more, but i read it befor i say much more, sadly i have to go to work first.
i hope they stay longer after everyone got their special somepony, otherwise it would be probably sad in the end.
It is only the prolouge so it is okay, but it even feels rather short. To be honest, i have read rather large stuff for a while, that´s maybe why this feels even shorter.
edit: Oh and i like this of course, the idea i mean.
I presume the pokemon in the title image are the ones that are going to be borrowed? If so could you add another just to even it out to six? That way there is one for each pony to interact with. So may I suggest Stantler perhaps? Though not as popular as the other choices, it is still a ungulate type of creature like them. Again just a suggestion. Either way I find the concept of the fic intriguing.
You'd think by now Twilight would learn that its common for friends, family, or any relationship to argue every so ofter. It's natural to have disagreements with someone close, I mean if you spend time with someone on a daily basis everyday, their eventually going to get on your nerves.
i still would like to know if you plan to let the pokemon to go back in their world in the end, or if they can stay, since i noticed a sentence that meant, that they only should stay till Twilight learned her lesson.
Well they probably stick together, or have an easier time with it than the Mane sic here, since they are supposed to teach them a lesson if i remember it right, even if it should be unconscious.
Keldeo : I would just assume him to be Twilights partner, and he would be probably calm, but still full of zest for life, and maybe forgiving.
Blitzle : Is probably, or maybe the partner for Rainbow Dash, i just think she would probably like either the fire type, or him.
Not sure if he should be boasting like Trixie, and full of confidence like Rainbow Dash. He could have a similar relationship with her as Rainbow Dash, and Applejack, or Rainbow is just proud to have an awesome Coltfriend, as awesome as herself.
Ponyta : I thought he could probably just show Applejack how to slow down, and not just work, thaking time for her friends, or his friends while he lives with her, even if she should not be happy about it as first.
I noticed there is one Pony that probably has not partner for herself, if that five on the picture is everything they get.
Deerling : for either Pinkie Pie, or shy :
for Pinkie : Maybe very excited, not hyperactive, but very excited, and happy with nearly everything, also easy to suprise.
for Shy : Not sure, maybe even more shy than Fluttershy, to show her....i don´t really know, or she just really likes her nature, and shows her that some animals even need some harsh words to understand what is good for them.
Girafarig . For Rarity? Psycho type, maybe a bit chic and vain, but still knows that it isnt a bad thing what the other say, or if he get´s dirty once in a while.
Need more story before I give this a star you get a tracking
somehow i thought he would be a "she".
I like the Fluttershy, and Fauna combination.
Rarity X (?) Keldeo would be nice too, if i can already guess his personality, then it could be nice. I like it how much she is trying, and that he is maybe playing a bit with her, i mean like she is doing with Spike sometimes.
Applejack, and Brandie...i totally forgot that i voted for that pairing, i guess i didn´t expected her to be female, what is a bit odd, since her race is female for me, or i like to catch female ones of that pokemon.
Girafarig ...so he is a male yes? somehow i think i have read female for a moment, but i don´t care right now, but now i am glad that he has to endure Twilight, and not Keldeo. Does that Girafarig like Keldeo?, or is it just something like a Keldeo fan?
Nice, but maybe you should make those chapters longer, since you have so many characters, and i would say two characters for every chapter, as long as they aren´t together, and don´t try to make to much timeskips, since i suppose it is ind of important for that kind of story, that we actually see how they help them with their friendship problems.
good work so far, if it continues so good, then i can maybe even make it my favourite.
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For Girafarig's gender, I must direct you here. The spots...
Um... Yeah, don't notice that the latest chapter is longer than the others... that's great... that's... fine...
You might want to get an editor, but good chapter over all.
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Mind pointing out a flaw? Overall, the main point bothers you is where...?
6323735 Strange I could have sworn I saw a few typos, but I cant see anything after re-reading?
6322427 sorry but i meant it more the way, that they should be longer if you plan to write about more characters at the same time in the next chapters, not that every pairing only get´s a few sentences, do you know what i mean?
not sure what i am supposed to see there, i only noice the 50/50 for male, and female.
I don´t mind it, i just thought you had written Girafarig as a female at the start of the chapter, but maybe i was just tired.
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Well, there is a gender difference. The purple coating for females is much shorter than the one for as The number of yellow spots for males on their hind legs is two while females only have one. If you look at the webpage again, specifically at heir sprites, you'll see what I mean.
6324543 aaaahhhh yes, never noticed it on this pokemon.
Very little for the long time, and I nearly forgot which name was for which pokemon, but I managed to remember, and I´m just glas that it isn´t dead.
Twilight Sparkle: Accidental Torturer.
It was good but I didn't understand it at first cause I forgot what happend in the last chapters. Still it was a nice little chapter and at least it ain't dead thats a plusle...get because its a~never mind I'll shut up now.
But besides that good to see your back
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Well, I found the pun to give me more Vigorth.
That joke will be the banette of me.
6877573 C'mon Manectric! Update already!!! Or do I have to Hypno-tize you?
Hope you get the next chapter up soon.
new chapter please
All I'm gonna say is this, this Arceus seems much more responsible than a certain other on this site.
6324543 2 questions. 1, you ever read New World? Cause it also has the good ship Keldarity, albeit Keldeo's the one with the crush.
2, is this story's Firebrand based(at least partially) on this one?
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6877573 You say that you don't like bad jokes, but I see the one you slipped in there.
Now you caught my attention. <(^_^<)
I will definitely have a goodknight knowing that this story shall be continued
I know that this is on hiatus for a very long time with no updates for over a year. Though I think it would be interesting to rewrite it with the addition of Mudsdale so it'll be an even 6:6 of Pokemon and ponies (or add it in sometime later whatever is fine with you).
Rip this fic.