Nightmare... A dream that takes place against the bearers will. A dream that haunts the bearer for a certain amount of time. And then, goes. Disappears.
I once thought that too, that nightmares eventually ended. But some nightmares don't disappear. Instead, they sleep. And then, wake up.
nice so far. the only issues i have is this. the sisters did not make Equestria. They took power only after Discord.
Thanks for the fact, I'll change that soon!
I'm not gonna be writing another chapter soon, my tablet has died and i'm on my parents computer. Chapters might be able to come by but don't get your hopes up if you're starting to like this.
issue. Celestia's eyes are magneta not blue.
5640863 okay, thanks for highlighting the mistakes, it's appreciated
Changed the ending of chapter 3
"It's been so long since I've seen your precious, little, sunlight faces."
"It's been so long since I've seen your precious, little, sun LOVING faces."
fix that.
5868882 Thank you!