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Instead of stone, the elements of harmony turned discord into a draconequus foal who imprinted on twilight sparkle as his mother, nothing wrong with that, right?

Written for Equestria Daily's The More Most Dangerous Game Writing Contest

Prompt:

-"An old foe is reincarnated in the body of a young pony. What will the Mane Six do when they find out?" (Past Sins)

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 9 )

Yes Moar!!!

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Thank you for liking it, unfortunately, that's just about it. For now, that is.

Keep me updated :D

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You got it :)

"That was all it took for Twilight.exe to stop functioning" "But before this scene ends, Pandemonium let out one final surprise by pointing straight at Twilight and declaring for the second time, “and you are my mommy!” with a cheerful attitude that made Twilight.exe crash."
Love these parts! lol It's a different and nice way to describe Twilight's mind. I like the imagery I get when thinking about Twilight's mind being a computer; I even hear the old dial up sound from AOL as Twi's brain reboots lol

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Glad you enjoyed them :twilightsmile:

this how it should happen

dont need him in season 3 instead this is logical thing it should have be

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Yeah, I thought the idea was a good one. though I think I messed up the pacing.

This is so cute and sweet that it gave me diabetes. Keep up the work.

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