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A shameless, unoriginal ripoff of a similarly titled show.

Anonymous, Second Chair of the Court and local Canterlot human, doesn't take it too well when Twilight goes back on her word. With the help of his assistant, he plans to exact his revenge on the Princess.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 20 )

Oh, you made it. I think read it up to 7 chapter, then Anon was send to make diplomacy.
Keep publishing.

That ending has me equally applauding and shaking my fist in anger.

this could be awesome. But what is Mr anonymous without Mrs. Anonymous... seriously Claire makes the show.

I wish to see more good sir.

This one remind's me of littlefinger

Hmmm, sounds like Anon is getting a bit greedy, a King eh?

That aside, well done! Really awsome fic!

Your story is good. You should feel good.

Head Chair Anonymous. You like the sound of that. But you know what sounds better?

King.

"And that's how King Sombra was made!"

Anon seems to be getting too big for his britches. Does he plan to overthrow the princesses?...
...or maybe become an alicorn himself? :derpytongue2:

Side note: This Twilight is a real jerk.

"Good. Please let the rest of my court in on your way out. Today we're trying to make it a law where it is illegal for Zebras to procreate."

Ok, I feel like someone needs to cunt-punt her just for that.

5516650 I just finished reading this and I have yet to find where that has been written.

5517427 It's at the very end of the seen where Twilight is holding a court and Anon comes to call her out on her breaking their deal. It's actually pretty early in the story.

I'd be more inclined to it if you didn't make him such an agreeing, spineless bitch.

I think it works pretty well on the plot side, but it feels kind of bare-bones. Pretty much nothing except for three characters is really properly defined or put into context. Makes it feel like it's sitting in a bit of a vacuum.

Comment posted by The Space Butterfly deleted Apr 11th, 2015

This is fucking great. 10/10

I really enjoyed this little story and it goes to show that just because you've read and studied the art of politics that its almost always dependent upon experience and finding the least painful middle ground whilst understanding each parties' problems

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