i love reading and writing and just being myself things that is sometime sparest but who cares right.
This is set just before she goes to but after the exam Celestia's school for gifted Unicorns. But after
Twilight is a bookworm, and a genius. This attracts un wanted attention, bully's and pony's that wish to take advantage of her are everywhere. One day bully's take it to far and it could end with blood on the floor. But what hey don't know is that after every storm there's a Rainbow.
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I get what this is trying to be: a nice little fanfic about Twi and Dash. However, it feels like you're trying to be poetic, and that's never good. The story has to write itself, not you. And than there's the problem with the spelling and grammar. Please get an editor. Also, should this have the "Alternate Universe" tag?
5510049 this is what I get when I wright in the morning okay
This story really needs an edit.
5642498 I KNOW I GET THAT FOR ALL MY STORYS SO I KNOW! I TRIED!
5642513 Maybe you can try finding a proof reader.
5642583 I don't know how
5642589 You have any irl friends who can help?
5643183 going to sound stupid irl? What's that?
5643191 In real life.
5643314 thought I did, though it could be another story I'm working on