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She always loved Granny Smith. She was kind, nurturing, and had funny stories. But she never would have guessed what Granny would help her realise.

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01982939w9w #1 · Jan 16th, 2015 · · ·

This story feels extremely rushed. It seemed like you really had too really stretch this concept so that it could reach the 1,000 word mark. Next time you write plan ahead. Make rough drafts, hire an editor and proofreader, and think of a main idea that can easily hit 2000+ words. Just my advice

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snowfu #2 · Jan 16th, 2015 · · ·

Thanks

PegaSeraph #3 · Jan 16th, 2015 · · ·

A little rough around the edges, but nice
(slow down)

01982939w9w #4 · Jan 16th, 2015 · · ·

5511448 You're welcome!

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