He is a Pegasus stallion and Lieutenant of the Royal Crystal Guards,
She is a Changeling and a spell caster to the Hive Guards.
When both meet only love will shine in their eyes,
and only love can stop a battle.
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He is a Pegasus stallion and Lieutenant of the Royal Crystal Guards,
She is a Changeling and a spell caster to the Hive Guards.
When both meet only love will shine in their eyes,
and only love can stop a battle.
Cool
Few misstypes like Crysalis instead of Chrysali, quiet/quite.
It could be good story but I see it will be way to bland
Really? misspells? I edited just now and all the misspells you mentioned I fixed before, guess I need an editor, Also they never fixed the problems like I wanted it to.
I fucking love this
5536433 Yay thank you ^^ I'm glad you guys like this story.
This has good potential, keep it up
Even if this story is very rushed (it'd take me at least 10K words to get to this part, maybe even 20-30K) it's a neat story...
Good job with the names btw.
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Thanks......... I think?
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Overall, I enjoy the story... and those moments with the Little changeling kid... simply love them
A good story, but the pacing is way too fast, and then there is the fact that your writing has a lot of issues with grammar, word choice, and a few cases of misspellings. Gonna track this to see where it goes though...
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
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I know it may seem rushed but this story isn't half from being done. I have a lot in the story I want to write it's just when i spit them into a computer it seems shorter than I expected it to be. There's so much that hasn't been covered in the story that I have to write, so don't give up on this story, I Pinkie Pie Swear it will get longer and better when the story progresses.
If I'm having mistakes I need a new editor, or bark at my one that is going to get fired if he doesn't read it instead of glancing at it.
When is the next chapter ready?
Um... I'm worried. Why there isn't a new chapter?