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Three friends find themselves in the Land of Equestria. With no memory of how they got there or why. Together with their new pony friends these three will share love and a lot of laughter as shenanigans ensue! But not all is love and laughter as a darkness is also coming to Equestria. What will happen then?
A collaboration between myself, Dream Caster Tessla, and DeathReaper 1541
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I am loving the concept of this story. There were a few missing words, but that happens when posting. The only thing that bothered me is that Twilight would not have forgotten about Canterlot High so easily. Now I don't know when you wrote this but just after the defeat of Tirek, Twilight goes back to help the Equestrian Girls. I am sure that you know about this, I just wanted to say that it's a good story.
I am aware of what you pointed out, but our thoughts were that we look different from the Canterlot High humans and so Twilight wasn't sure what to think of us
No, she's not
5506503 Applejacks element of harmony is honesty. Look it up.
5507541 It used to be her element
5507761 Just because she no longer has the jewelry to wear doesnt mean that she no longer has the element. She still represents honesty.
5507914 Then why don't they refer to her as such? Because she and her friends aren't the elements anymore
5507971 Yes they are. The Elements of Harmony are more than physical objects. Each of them still represents the Element they had. Just because the jewelry is gone does not mean they are no longer the Elements of Harmony
Urgh.
Tessla.
Oh mer gerd why?
Epicness is hilariousness XD
Huh.
How convenient that Tessla and Austin know each other XD.
Again, SOMEHOW BEN and AUSTIN and TESSLA know each other! SOMEHOW!
5602307 Thanks for all the comments, but i don't quite get this one. Is the name Tessla that you have an issue with?
5602982 Okay. You went way too far into this. I realize you made some valid points but this is supposed to be a lighthearted read and it is supposed to be comical and a bit nonsensical. And maybe try a bit of constructive criticism instead of just slamming the whole thing
5602982 Yeah, you really do need a break, cause you just ripped into a comedy story that's mostly poking fun at random things we like to poke fun at. I will admit, some of your points are valid, like the general location of where it's happening, but that's about it. Keep in mind what the show is like, with how random things can be and how the mood can shift as a form of humor, especially when Pinkie Pie is around. I'd completely understand and let this slide if you were giving constructive criticism, but what you did was just rude and inconsiderate.
5602307 What? I like my name.
5602375 That's because we're friends. If it doesn't say so in the story, then you could just say that. :P
That and one day all of them will be getting a more in depth back story
Dammit Pinkie quit breaking the 4th wall.
. No I don't wanna so there.
Pinkie get outta my comment! 
Nope This is to much fun I'm staying.
Ok fine. I Blame you Mr Author you started it.
Oh Pinkie..... You rock the awesome train!
Sorry dash, but Pinkie is the only one who can break the fourth wall and that makes her hilariously awesome.
My pleasure Pinkie.
Btw... This was awesome. I know there is more to read, but still. Had to comment.
5655685 I thank you for your comment and heartily welcome any more that you might want to send out. It's glad to see that someone enjoys my story. I had a really negative comment not too long ago that got me down, but it is comments like yours that raise my spirits again. Thanks again for that and be ready for more shenanigans to come
5649722 You know what?! So what if i did start it? (I actually didn't, but lets keep that a secret) You should know as well as i that PInkie Pie is not a mare that can be contained within a mere three walls
5730417 No I'm not.
I just was surprised that these three know each other when you know.......we didn't get to see a back story of these three meeting each other. So, confusion set in and I saw things strangely.
Sorry. -_-.
5730421 Not everyone have to tell you their backstory you know....
5805885 I know.
But sometimes, the backstory is what i like most of the story.
Cause you get to know the character more :)
hmm
lol where the hell did pinkie come from
"Thorn Blackrose, pony duelist extraordinaire. now stood there with his white coat..."
wasn't his fur blood red? was Blackrose wearing something?
5895729 i hada first draft of that chapter that i ended up rewriting. He's supposed to have a white coat. Ill make sure to fix that.
5896311 kk
5603005
That is exactly what constructive criticism should look like, and you should probably take notice. But hey, if its ment to be a retarted, non logical story, then so be it!
If he was 'slamming' it, he would be doing this:
"FUCK UR STORIE M8 IT SUXS IT IS SO BAD U SHOULDD GETZ CANCER AND DIE FEG"
Obviously, he aint.
5990816 I have to disagree. Your example of slamming was exaggerated and unlikely. And that is not what constructive criticism looks like. That follows a rather simple format: here's what was wrong and here is you can go about fixing it. All that said in that post was what I did wrong and sounded insulting.
Also about your retarted word use. If you found it that bad you shouldn't have fucking read it all the way through. If you don't like it then don't read it. That simple
5991405
I never personally said it was retarted, but judging from what the original critisiser said and what you told him in reply, I assumed the story wasn't really men't to follow logic. Sorry if I offended you in any way, but I believe that what he told you was criticism to a certain degree. Granted, he did slam you're story, and by judging what he said, looks like I might have done the same thing. But I haven't had time to read yet, so hey, it might be great! Who knows.
But seriously, most slamming is like what I said these days. You'd be surprised, honestly.
5994500 you should read your first comment again, because it reads like you are calling my story retarted even if you don't mean it. And that other comment was criticism, i never said it wasnt. It was just harsh criticism that bordered on the edge of slamming my story, and then fell over that edge. And then you did the same thing without even reading the story first. Why don't you actually go through and read my story, come up with your own thoughts on it instead of using someone elses and then comment on what you thought? Don't assume you know anything based one what one person wrote in a comment. Do this for all the stories you read, and you wont risk offending anybody.
PS this is what constructive criticism looks like. Its a loose example, but you get the idea
fuckin pinkie at the end lol
Fluffle Puff?
That.......happend.
Sweet Celestia there are 3 pinkies i wonder if i get to control them
Pinkie Pie! STOP BREAKING THE FUCKING 4 WALL!
6274711 Three Pinkies? What do you mean?
Yeah Dash, don't you know that Furries ruin everything.
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Sometimes I think we don't see more of Zecora because the writers of the show suck at making rhymes.
5730417
That is hardly what he's implying, you hair-triggered nimwit. He's objecting to the story's current lack of answers.
2/3 where hell the is 3 crystal empire?
nvm.
i wounding we get see flash sentry?
wrong there lot more then that!
OK I'm only 3 chapters deep and I can tell I'm going to love this
I am interested.
I am finally caught up.
Crap