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Leoshi


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The winter weather has played havoc on poor Scootaloo. She's suffering from one of the worst colds on record! And Rainbow Dash, being the helpful guardian she is, decides to do whatever she can to make her feel better. It will involve board games. It will involve medicine and making sure Scootaloo gets her rest. But first, it's cheering the little filly up through mischievous means.

A quick, cute, one-and-done story inspired by the cover photo.

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Comments ( 24 )

GAARGH! The adorableness! It's killing me!

I wrote a review of this story. You can find it here.

5495034 It's alright! Health insurance is free in Equestria!


5495419 Ah, I'm not surprised at this kind of reaction. Still, it's fair enough, and completely justified considering I spent only three hours on this thing. Thanks for taking the time to review it!

5495748 That's not a straight-and-narrow attitude! ;p hahaha

5495467
Yeah, I was just kind of randomly browsing new stories when I spotted it. I do try to sometimes look out at things that I don't normally read just to, you know, take a look around. Doesn't always end up working out for me.

Good luck with your future writing!

5496991 I'm in a similar mindset. I collect stories I want to read, but the ones that are cringe-worthy usually end up in a "bad stories to be reviewed" shelf I call the Floor. So I understand where you're coming from. No harm, no foul.

And THIS is why I like stories were RD takes on the heavy mantle of being Scoots guardian, Scoots would be as good for RD as RD is good for Scoots! `

5499804 Glad to see I'm not the only one who feels that way!

After a long, cold day at work, this was the perfect little story to curl up and read.

Thank you for sharing. :twilightsmile:

5500966 You are most welcome.

May I advise you to fix eventual mistakes?

5516417 Sorry, I don't understand what you're asking.

5517671 Spelling/grammar mistakes of course. I'm astounded no one has complained about it.

5519302 Allow me to clarify...

May I advise you to fix eventual mistakes?

I'm not sure whether you're offering to point out mistakes on future projects, if you're asking if you may point out mistakes on this project, or if you're suggesting I do so on my own time.

Spelling/grammar mistakes of course. I'm astounded no one has complained about it.

If you've spotted any, by all means let me know! While I take pride in my own editing, I've never claimed to be perfect. Knowing where I stumble helps me go farther with future projects.

As for why nobody's mentioned any errors, maybe they're too bashful to come forward with them. Maybe there are few to speak of. *Shrug* Who knows?

5519548

I'm not sure whether you're offering to point out mistakes on future projects, if you're asking if you may point out mistakes on this project, or if you're suggesting I do so on my own time.

I'm advising you to fix this project. I'll be more than happy to look it over after work.

awww this was really sweet :twilightsheepish:

Jes

Very nice! I'm actually sick right now, so it was a pleasant read to got some chuckles out of me. :pinkiehappy:

also,

Rianbow softly giggled

I'm sure you see the problem here.

5680840 Thank you for the catch! Fixed. Also, glad I could make your day a little brighter. Feel better!

Yis, that was adorable! :pinkiehappy:

Pretty cool. Are you sure this Rainbow Dash isn't a mother too, sheesh! Talk about absentee parents. Still, this is a great day in the life story. Thumbs up!

Freaking love the cover art of Scoots wrapped in that blanket :rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss: sooooooooo cute

6687206 Blanket burrito! Pony blanket burrito!

Now this is adorable.

Like super cute. :raritystarry:

My only complaint is that the whole smacking thing didn't really need to be there.

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