• Member Since 17th Feb, 2014
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Other than a Cybertronian writing utensil, I am an avid brony that is partial to writing novice-level stories whenever an idea pops into my head, whether I like it, or not. It's mostly the latter.

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*Looks at Cover Art*

This is me:

It's sweet, looking forward to more.

5493432 *Looks at the mass of downvotes* Expected. Downwards and on wards I go!

Woah what the fuck, what's with all the downvotes?

5495112 I half expected the reaction, to be honest. But unlike Reign of Blood, this won't deter me from continuing it.

Why all the downvotes? So far this is just as good as the first one.

What's with all the down votes?!

Jesus christ, those downvotes...

I would expect it's due to the cover art; it's certainly creepy enough. If not, then a sooper-secret cabal of anti-Cupcakes Brigadiers found this.

Or will her ego and position of power at the infamous Rainbow Factory consume her completely and push her further away from a mare she unknowingly has already lost.

That's a question, not a sentence. And cut down your adverbs.

5495694 Razzle! I have missed you. :heart:

5495694 Changed the summary. Hope it is better.


Thanks for liking this! The prologue hasn't got much in it really, but I hope to change that soon with the second chapter. And, don't worry about the down votes, it happens!

5503557 Thank you. Glad you liked it. Hope to get the next chapter up tonight. :pinkiecrazy:

Wow...What's up with all the dislikes for this story? It's only been out for two or three days and already it has about over 30 dislikes. I haven't read the story yet, but it must have something that viewers didn't like or whatever. Doesn't matter to me, since I'm usually unbiased when it comes to grimdark stories (as long it well written that is) and I like the first story so, I thought it was good, so this sequel can't be all bad, Yes-No? :trixieshiftright:

5504627 I don't know. I am writing this on my own edit... and frankly I don't care why. As long as you like the story, that is all that matters to me. The downvote happened quick and fast and to be perfectly honest, I couldn't give two shits why they downvoted.

5504833 I've learnt you write for the upvotes, never worry about the opposite end. As long someone finds entertainment then I can't be wrong.


Well, at least you're optimistic about it. :twilightsheepish:

Yay, you updated! Can't wait for chapter 3!

Session 42? But in the last story it said that session 31 was Fluttershy's and Pinkie's last session together before Pinkie tore Flutter's skin off.

I really like the cover art. The way she has AJ bound and gagged there looks like bdsm more then it does a serial killer torturing her victim.

Next chapter? I really like this:fluttercry: please:fluttercry:

Please continue this sadistic story that is terrifying. I would enjoy it. :pinkiecrazy:

5520801 This was well noted and corrected. Couldn't believe I did that.

Enjoying this fic so far :twilightsmile:
Hope you continue it one day.

I really liked this story and the story it's a sequel to. However I must ask, why has it been cancelled?


Why the hell was it cancelled? That's an awesome piece of work especially knowing Pinkie's attached her soul to Applejack evidently, so she DID kill her but the party mare's tainted soul lingered on within her mind.

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