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Architect of Realities
We are both the maker and the destroyer, our will bends and makes realms or agents whom act in our stead. Many fear us for we try to bring change weather great or small due to our scattered reasoning.
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I'll follow, for now
We will observe thee, though be warned others may become 'entangled' in our little human's affairs as things develop.
Bit hard to follow the dialogue but it looks interesting. So favorited for now.
We are pleased to hear thy comment and will try to redeem it, reality translations aside we hope to learn more of what others see in our little human.
*attempts to prod others with a tentacle to hear more of their comments about our little human.* Hmmm, perhaps our looming draped over one's shoulder is scaring the ponies or humans away? we hope not as their input may help 'improve' how we twist and turn events.
I only have one complaint. It's really hard to understand what is going on in this story. Basically like who's POV it is and what they're talking about. I like the way you write the dialogue but it does make it hard to keep track of who is doing what. Other than that this story is great.
On a side note our little pony we believe after rereading the first two chapters we have wrote down the character's name as for perspective, but we'll work harder to clear it up given time.
So, the human is sombra, correct? Cool.
5503633 Indeed it is 'cool' as one says, though tell us how thou feels of our human's journey currently? also the one known as Metal Heart as she had joined.
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since I'm terrible with words...I like it, another!
Metal Heart will be interesting.
5503644 We are pleased by thy response, we request upon future points to be telling us of faults as well the good.
Good chapter, I don't see anything bad about it.
the plot thickens...
5571100 How did thou feel when reading it? Also we plan to offer other choices from our blog pertaining to our little tyrant.
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Hmm...entertained like I am when reading good stories, interested...don't know what else to say other than it's good. *shrug*
this is the first story I've read that's done a displaced turning into sombra...with the details and stuff that isn't in a story called hail to the king, which was my first story like this.
It's a complement, and I'm off to the dreamscape now.
Man, is "Sombra" quite the popular stallion. Two princesses of the Emoire, Dark Heart, Keen Mind, Valira, Star Talent, and now possibly Luna. I like this story. Keep up the good job.
Nah, Metal heart, I'm not mad.
Hmm, this was a good chapter, I enjoyed the meditation scene, and glad to see none of them aren't really angry with him.
I also hope that the Nightmare doesn't hapoen here, because you know, his involvement and such...
5590263 Lets say there is obvious 'reasons' to get on our little 'Sombra's' side that he is not aware of yet, though as for the two princesses let us say it was something that had a growing potential from childhood from the original Sombra. But as for the Equestrian Princesses are concerned he has their interest but it may be murky as for WHAT kind that may affect his future, but we shall state that the first may be one of those strange encounters as thou must realize that at this point in time they are worshipped as Goddesses, cultural mishaps can happen which could lead to diplomatic messes..
But for Dark Faith thou must remember what he DID to understand that one.
5590268 It may go to canon or it may divert slightly, or far worse could be what he may BECOME as another! There could be deaths from the implications of that one alone as he has already 'tasted' murder by order. But not everything is set in stone as a pretty pink princess once said in another tale.
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Did you just quote a quote from another story I've read?
And really, I'm just hoping for the best.
as for your previous reply to a different user, yeah, it could end in many ways, they miht ev3n like him for not treating them like they are literally god(desses)
5590285 We see thou enjoy lovely readings of promise, but there will be dark times and we'll do our best to try and corrupt him into one of our 'ideal' champions for something bigger. Though we admit that these other 'Displaced' may work against our machinations, to test our influence's limits and prod the beast that will hopefully become a weapon of Fear and Hate against others.
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well, I'm betting he won't be as bad as the actual canon/fanon sombra.
5590295 Thou hast taunted us? We shall try our best then! *begins to sort through vile ink stained notes with his tentacles from the void.*
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well, he is different from sombra, I'm just stating a fact.
5590332 True, we shall see. As we have not laid out for all to see the big picture yet.
thy story is amazing we hope to see more art thou work.
5614814 We are currently in the process, though do note we offer chances for others to affect this tale by the blog.
Awesome chapter. It was funny watching Sombra flustered due to Faith flirting/cleaning him and Star's seductive teachings. Hope to see more of this story.
5633491 What else of this did thou enjoy?
Heheh, this was good.
5634098 In what ways was it good mare of Jerremy?
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the acts of getting up, that was funny, the star's seductiveness, which was also funny, just about everything really.
5634125 How do thou think our little 'Sombra' is taking it all?
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he's taking it pretty well, he seems to be rolling with it.
5634187 We believe there is a story with a similar title, though what of the smaller things learned this chapter?
5633609 Definitely Metal Heart's attitude and the mothering personality of Snout.
5634545 We are curious what thou thought of all the companions personalities were like to thou, or how if the mane six met them and interacted? Hmmm, we think it could have mixed results, two over thinkers, two fancy types, two different rough types and two combative types? the sombra companion may be at odds with pinkie but we have no one yet for the one fitting against kindness.. YET.
5634753 I don't really like Sombra. I like how the Griffin, Mind, and Star seem to be attracted to him and I find Snout's mothering to be funny. I don't remember the sixth personality, but I can say that I like him.
5634778 At this time there would be five within his mindscape, though as for the original sombra it was before his decent but he is knowledgeable about his craft. The Amulet is always there with our human but thou has to wonder why 'she' only spoke verbally in the mind but not when he's awake.
5634794 I do wonder how Faith would interact with the Crystal. Princesses. Odds are she'd be jealous/possessive of Sombra and act more flirty around him like the incident with the armor and the morning surprise to lay her claim"
5634852 We shall ask that thou read the pieces before 'Sombra' went to sleep, there is a certain line that may raise eyebrows and bring palms to rest on face.
Good chapter as always.
Sunset shimmer...hhuh.
5680287 Not all things be the same when our displaced be involved, which parts stick out to thou?
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well I liked all of it, hmmm......the part with starswirl and sunset maybe? It's hard to say which one really.
I really hope you get someone who knows how to comment properly in here...
5680321 We hope our watchers or those whom read of our human will grace us with their thoughts as well, for it brings us joy getting comments.
I am content with seeing how this plays out AoR. I find enjoyment and intrigue in reading this story and wait with rapt anticipation to see what happens next.
Really liked the political intrigue of this chapter. From Starswirl berating the three Founders, to the Crystal Empire's officers plotting against Sombra, to Celestia trying to understand Luna's motivations. I also enjoyed the shipping Sombra has with the royalty as it was pretty cute watching the Crystal princesses have a food fight for him and Celestia scolding Luna for watching Sombra's wet dream and Luna wanting Celestia to join in on the romance. It was a great chapter. Last question though. Did Luna actively did anything to Crlestia when she joined in on her wet dream? I found the phrasing confusing.
5680856 It may have been eluded that she altered it a 'bit' by joining in on her fun, she may NEVER admit to what or anything if she has or hasn't, though an idea was placed in her head by that dream. Also we too a look at the ones with influence closest to the crowns into factor for future events. We wonder if thou had seen the reference we placed for that part, in all we are overjoyed by thou being detailed of the comment for this current chapter.
5680543 We are overjoyed by hearing what thou has to say of being figuratively on the edge of thou seating. Future tidings has been hinted at in few separated points if thou tries to comb over and compare to the time line, all that we say is that year 0035 of unification be the now, perhaps in two decades time be when a truly horrid year happens to the sisters of which we shall not say, but some villains and events are still hinted.
OK, this chapter is interesting. I hope to see how Sombra will interact with the Princesses (Alicorn) along with Shatter Hoof's interaction with Celestia.
5742143 in that age and time we shall let it be known that many heads were younger and hotter, literal and figurative. Also there would be both tribest and speciest views taken as we see that it is a dark time, in a way it could be fitting of the dark ages.
Hmm, I wonder where tambelon is?