I am the Historical Expert, especially about the Age of Discovery (Mostly are about the colonization in America of the Spanish Empire and the British Empire) and I am also the Master of the Ideas.
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This story is a sequel to In Honor of Them
When Twilight and her friends want to to go to the Castle of the Two Sisters in order to take more books and more tapestries for Rarity's fashion line. But they can't go in because the castle is now got the new aggressive owners.
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I have no words for how bad this is. No comments that could help it.
First and formost. Chapter should be -
Castle is Ours Now
Grammar is your friend.
But they all are shock from what they see before them.
said Twilight when she's saw the Laser Cannons of the Nagas are on the walls.
I don't want to insult you. But at times it's hard to tell what I'm reading. Do you happen to have an editor or someone you can run your work by to help you?
Hmmm.
I'll give you a thumbs up, simply for effort and the concept.