A small, grey filly sat awkwardly on her haunches, staring in wonder towards the sky. Her mismatched, amber eyes were widening in joy as she gazed up at the beautiful rainbow that was forming overhead. Rainbows had always given her wonderful waves of nostalgia, reminding her of her one pleasant memory-of her mother. This is the story of how a lost and abandoned filly came to once again feel the comforting embrace of someone who cared, someone who loved her, someone who treasured her.
Chapters (4)
This is pretty good, I look forward to seeing how this plays out
5486680 Thanks! I wasn't really sure what people would think, so I'm glad you like it
Congrats on your first fic! It really is a wonderful concept and I'm enjoying your use of detail to portray Derpy's rather desperate circumstances. This story shows a lot of potential and I await further chapters. As far as mistakes go I spotted very few and they were negligible at best. Keep writing and you'll only get better. Liking and following.
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Thank you so much! You have no idea how much that means to me! I'm writing the next chapter as we speak, so hopefully, it will live up to current expectations! Also, I must give you something for your kind words. Here, have a muffin 
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I almost was in tears!
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I still think this is really good. The concept is cute and so far it's well thought out. Just a question, did you make up the term Irish Treasure, or is that really a thing? Also is the story about the leprechauns something you were told as a child or is that made up too? I ask because it seems like a very believable story to be told to children. Also I spotted a few errors as I was reading. Nothing serious but I figured I'd mention them.
You want its here.
you want won't, name's, and that's respectively
Wouldn't
Just a formatting issue your quotation mark is off
Thanks for continuing to write and I look forward to more from you.
5490842 No, I just made up the whole leprechaun thing. I had wanted to post a story for a while, so I tried to think of something, and the first thing that popped into my head was Derpy, and leprechauns for some reason
I don't know. My brain works weird. Also, thanks for pointing out the grammar and stuff! I've always been pretty bad with apostrophes 
Thanks for reading! 
5490617 Yes! I hit the feels! Exactly where I was aiming
Well I'm glad u got what ur aiming for!
Good chapter I liked it, thanks for the feels trip lol
5499197 Thanks! I appreciate the appreciation
I'm intrigued, keep writing, I'd love to see where this goes.
5502952 Thanks for the comment! I shall continue to write, then! Onward!
I'm hoping this ends well. Then again, no tragedy, so it will all be al-right in the end
, and be full of good old fasioned feels.
You kinda went and pulled the cancer card, which is kinda no. But hey this is Equestria, if some unicorn haven't found a magical cure, then may Faust strike me down
Do continue good sir.
5510949 yea, I know that was kind of bad, but it happens, and I've even had experience with it, so I just kinda went for it.... But it will end happy :)
5513990 Thank you, I was afraid I might have to get lightning insurance
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5515635 lol XD
Have a like and a fave on this beauty
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Awww thank you!
Maybe I should attempt updating this.....eventually
A mawesome (so awesome I could eat it) story!
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Shrank you, you are quite mawesome as well. And that avatar is a beaut, I must say.
5970657 Thank you, but Lone wolf from the East deserves the credit for my avatar, not me.
It's unfortunate that this story is dead. It was very good and had potential.