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Worlds fused

Dr. Eggman has transported the country of Equestria across time and space to Mobius, and is planning to unleash ultimate evil. The only thing that can stop it is the combined might of chaos and harmony is powerful enough to stop it. But will some of our heroes find more than friends along the way?

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Chapter 1 · 9th Jan 2015 · 1,742 words
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Chapter 2 · 9th Jan 2015 · 3,915 words
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Chapter 3 · 15th Jan 2015 · 2,583 words
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Sketchjo65

Sketchjo65 #1 · Jan 9th, 2015 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Pretty neat chapter. Just be careful with the plot and try to make it a good story. Most people here hate sonic because of the amount of crossover story's here.

Kobitsu

Kobitsu #2 · Jan 9th, 2015 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Princess Celestia was an alicorn like twilight but much older. She has a pure white coat and feathers with a mane and tail of multiple colors examples being sky blue, cobalt blue , light green, and pale pink. Luna was also an alicorn, but slightly younger than Celestia. She was a dark blue fur with a mane and tail like that of the sky on a moonless night.

You can edit that out.We all know how they look like, so those descriptions of them are unneeded

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graysean86

graysean86 #4 · Jan 16th, 2015 · · · Chapter 3 ·

5482609 ill write how i want to write

Needling Haystacks

Needling Haystacks #5 · May 13th, 2016 · · · Chapter 3 ·

5511445 I doubt offense was meant. Describing things people already know is a valid stylistic choice: I'm pretty sure everyone knows what a sunrise looks like, but Homer described it anyway. Granted, that was poetic, not prose, and there's probably an extended metaphor, but my point is there's possible reasons. Like if a sonic fan that wasn't familiar with MLP was to read this.

I considered doing a sonic/pony crossover myself, but I put that on the back burner when I found out there were a number of 'em out there... such as this one. XP