5757639 I am well aware of all of these things. But as this is my story I will happily write my vampires how I like and I still appreciate your very valid point.
5834297 This has already been handled by the author. From Saro0fd3monz in response to my comment
I am well aware of all of these things. But as this is my story I will happily write my vampires how I like and I still appreciate your very valid point.
My reply
Well you have artistic license, so however you want to do it is fine with me. Good to find somebody else who knows a good bit of mythology.
Awesome. Glad you posted the blog(s). Reminded me that there were side stories in this universe.
I love seeing characters grow into crazy-powerful badasses. It was nice to see Vinyl's origins, and I am VERY much looking forward to Spike's now.
I don't suppose Vinyl taking Octavia's virginity is sufficient to trigger the blood-of-a-virgin-titan power boost thing, is it? Although I suppose then the good doctor might have gotten it... not that it really matters on him...
Not the point.
I'm still not sure I understand what happened to Jade, tho. Vinyl's father tried to betray Big Boss first? and killed his wife as part of that betrayal? It doesn't seem like something he would do, given how Spike and Vinyl talked about him. Or one of BB's lackeys killed her (damn, that was one SERIOUSLY powerful lackey) and BB found her dead, and somehow turned her to bring her back, and made her love him in the process? Or did Jade actually love BB and so she betrayed Vinyl's father and ran off to BB?
Also, why did Jade never agree to be turned by Vinyl's father? Granted, those defenses or whatever prevented it, but clearly they were circumvented. Personal dislike of the idea just isn't enough to justify it. All other things aside, the aging thing alone is huge. Or at least I assume it is. We talking like living twice as long? or longer? She would leave him so early... How could you do that to the person you love?
Those last to paragraphs might have linked answers.
I'm not intending this to be harsh, if that's how it sounds, I really loved the story. I'm just a bit confused at some points.
6093047 All of these are very good questions which I wanted to answer properly in this story but never really found the space for it. Actually, I might just put it back as Incomplete and just start writing more of what happens to Vinyl in this story instead of through Spikes story. Theres a lot she does 'solo' and so we won't see it in Spikes story.
This is one of the more confusing stories on fim fiction, the idea behind it is marvelous well by my standards, the only.problem. was execution, it was put together in some odd ways, and this last chapter I have been waiting a very long time for. Regardless I love a good vamp fic
6445560 I apologize, the world building for this story is done in the main story "Discovering Friendship" - This is simply a side story explaining one of the characters.
The ending? Is that... a cliffhanger?
5708334 adding anymore to it will spoil Spike's storyline ahead of time
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Oh ok! can't wait for Spike's storyline then.
5757639 I am well aware of all of these things. But as this is my story I will happily write my vampires how I like and I still appreciate your very valid point.
5758038 Well you have artistic license, so however you want to do it is fine with me.
Good to find somebody else who knows a good bit of mythology.
Just as high quality as Discovering friendship, Minimal errors, consistent characterization. TIER FOUR.
This. Story. Was. AWESOME!!!
And lol. "The Virgin Gaian is no longer a Virgin." That made me chuckle...
5834297 This has already been handled by the author.
From Saro0fd3monz in response to my comment
My reply
Also, http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dhampir
5834554 I'm glad you enjoyed it I put a lot of work into this story and it means a lot to me that its doing so well.
Awesome. Glad you posted the blog(s). Reminded me that there were side stories in this universe.
I love seeing characters grow into crazy-powerful badasses. It was nice to see Vinyl's origins, and I am VERY much looking forward to Spike's now.
I don't suppose Vinyl taking Octavia's virginity is sufficient to trigger the blood-of-a-virgin-titan power boost thing, is it? Although I suppose then the good doctor might have gotten it... not that it really matters on him...
Not the point.
I'm still not sure I understand what happened to Jade, tho. Vinyl's father tried to betray Big Boss first? and killed his wife as part of that betrayal? It doesn't seem like something he would do, given how Spike and Vinyl talked about him. Or one of BB's lackeys killed her (damn, that was one SERIOUSLY powerful lackey) and BB found her dead, and somehow turned her to bring her back, and made her love him in the process? Or did Jade actually love BB and so she betrayed Vinyl's father and ran off to BB?
Also, why did Jade never agree to be turned by Vinyl's father? Granted, those defenses or whatever prevented it, but clearly they were circumvented. Personal dislike of the idea just isn't enough to justify it. All other things aside, the aging thing alone is huge. Or at least I assume it is. We talking like living twice as long? or longer? She would leave him so early... How could you do that to the person you love?
Those last to paragraphs might have linked answers.
I'm not intending this to be harsh, if that's how it sounds, I really loved the story. I'm just a bit confused at some points.
Next on the list: Friendshorts!
6093047 All of these are very good questions which I wanted to answer properly in this story but never really found the space for it. Actually, I might just put it back as Incomplete and just start writing more of what happens to Vinyl in this story instead of through Spikes story. Theres a lot she does 'solo' and so we won't see it in Spikes story.
This is one of the more confusing stories on fim fiction, the idea behind it is marvelous well by my standards, the only.problem. was execution, it was put together in some odd ways, and this last chapter I have been waiting a very long time for. Regardless I love a good vamp fic
6445560 I apologize, the world building for this story is done in the main story "Discovering Friendship" - This is simply a side story explaining one of the characters.