A unicorn by the name of Blank Slate is using his magic to get ponies to do things they normally wouldn't. Little does he know that his actions are being watched from the shadows.
“I hope you’re right,” said Luna, still unconvinced by the white alicorn’s overwhelming optimism. Celestia was the type who could be completely helpless, magic sapped from her body, and still look a foe in the eye with a smirk.
If Twilight's Kingdom is any indication, damn straight.
“More carrots lord Angel bunny?” said an illusionary version of Fluttershy, wearing a modest maid’s outfit, as she held a bowl of carrots bigger than the rabbit itself before him. Other identifiable visages were present, in the form of other ponies that Luna had seen in Ponyville during her visit. A notable example was Rarity, who appeared when the rabbit took a carrot and extended his other jewelry covered paw over his throne’s arm.
Err...
“I kinda… sorta… fell asleep in the classroom.” Rumble put his hand to the back of his head and gave a large smile, accompanying it with a nervous grin. “Surprised Miss Cheerilee hasn’t woken me up yet.”
I am so very sorry that this took so long to come out. To all my patient readers I thank you for sticking around. I WILL be returning to regular updates of Equestria Trainers' Society soon, as my other project is coming to a conclusion. I would say that frequent updates will return as of August, but I wouldn't quote me on that.
Hey, I've seen stories go on hiatuses for longer than a year. It's cool, and most of us are willing to be patient do you can keep producing high quality work.
6134267 Is it bad that I can't wait for someone to go ape shit and beat one of the Society members into a pulp? I'm hoping it's Luna caving in Blueblood or Fancy Pants head with a hammer, because fuck those guys figuratively.
6136783 Actually, I'm going to say no. In many cases it is up to the individual reader to determine which side they prefer, whether they are for or against the Society. Some people enjoy the rape fetishism, or even just the heavy BDSM themes, some people would rather see the Society burned down and Schorl put to the stake. Whether you are at one side or the other, or somewhere in between, there is nothing wrong with your opinion.
Now I would say that maybe you are suggesting that some parties get punished when they don't deserve it. There is a part in a previous chapter that does heavily imply that Schorl manipulates some of the members to make them act more "dominate" than they should be to the point that their actions might not be of their own accord, and if that is the case I don't think it would be fair if their brains got smashed out for something they wouldn't have done without her influence .
6136916 Trust me, I'm loving the BDSM side of the story and I've read the stories before this one, I'm just hoping at some point Luna finds the rabbit hole into all the dark shit the Princesses can't see. I'm not saying we should kill Rarity or the few decent members of the Society, but I'm a sucker for poetic justice and I'm sure some of the people there were terrible people before Schorl got to them... Plus I've always hated Blue Balls.
I love the way you built the dreamscape. It's so imaginative.
Also, how you describe Luna being ejected from Rumble's dream; it took me a little while, but this is kept close to what happened in Sleepless in Ponyville, isn't it? Where Luna entered Scootaloo's dream until she woke up? I don't think I've ever read as close a version as the one here.
I'm wondering if Celestia has a hand in the society due to the fact that she doesn't want her sister to investigate the disappearances even though Luna would be great at helping, instead she has to work in secret and that really puts restrictions on her work. That's my opinion though and it's been with me for a while since I started reading the earlier stories where Luna started investigating so that's my opinion.
If Twilight's Kingdom is any indication, damn straight.
Err...
Schorl, relax. It's OK.
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Sorry, . I take personal failure very hard and I don't like keeping all my EqTS readers waiting for updates for so long.
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Hey, I've seen stories go on hiatuses for longer than a year. It's cool, and most of us are willing to be patient do you can keep producing high quality work.
6134267 Is it bad that I can't wait for someone to go ape shit and beat one of the Society members into a pulp? I'm hoping it's Luna caving in Blueblood or Fancy Pants head with a hammer, because fuck those guys figuratively.
6136783 Actually, I'm going to say no. In many cases it is up to the individual reader to determine which side they prefer, whether they are for or against the Society. Some people enjoy the rape fetishism, or even just the heavy BDSM themes, some people would rather see the Society burned down and Schorl put to the stake. Whether you are at one side or the other, or somewhere in between, there is nothing wrong with your opinion.
Now I would say that maybe you are suggesting that some parties get punished when they don't deserve it. There is a part in a previous chapter that does heavily imply that Schorl manipulates some of the members to make them act more "dominate" than they should be to the point that their actions might not be of their own accord, and if that is the case I don't think it would be fair if their brains got smashed out for something they wouldn't have done without her influence .
6136916 Trust me, I'm loving the BDSM side of the story and I've read the stories before this one, I'm just hoping at some point Luna finds the rabbit hole into all the dark shit the Princesses can't see. I'm not saying we should kill Rarity or the few decent members of the Society, but I'm a sucker for poetic justice and I'm sure some of the people there were terrible people before Schorl got to them... Plus I've always hated Blue Balls.
I love the way you built the dreamscape. It's so imaginative.
Also, how you describe Luna being ejected from Rumble's dream; it took me a little while, but this is kept close to what happened in Sleepless in Ponyville, isn't it? Where Luna entered Scootaloo's dream until she woke up? I don't think I've ever read as close a version as the one here.
Ahhhh! I have been waiting for this chapter~! Don't worry, Mistress, I was gone for a long time, but your cover will be done soon~
I'm wondering if Celestia has a hand in the society due to the fact that she doesn't want her sister to investigate the disappearances even though Luna would be great at helping, instead she has to work in secret and that really puts restrictions on her work. That's my opinion though and it's been with me for a while since I started reading the earlier stories where Luna started investigating so that's my opinion.