A unicorn by the name of Blank Slate is using his magic to get ponies to do things they normally wouldn't. Little does he know that his actions are being watched from the shadows.
Well now look what we have here. Interesting start, not my particular cup of tea but still well done Schorl. But now time to fall back intothe shadows before I'm caught.
5477504 Too late, caught. And don't worry, there might be a bit more clop before the real meat of the story, but we will soon get into the good ol' plot elements you enjoy so much.
5477518 meh clop is fine I mean it is the EqTS universe, can't really expect it not to mix plot and clop....and Unintended innuendos ...and I am my captured...that was a tree
I'll admit, I don't like male on male, but I think I'll follow this, see where it goes and like give it an upvote for good measure, it's well written, it's flows well and it might prove interesting.
I have to say this beginning chapter had me giggling and squealing as I read. I also spotted two errors though I need to remember where they were I really enjoyed reading, great job and keep up the good work!!
Something about this reminds me of another fic by the name of Smoke. I do enjoy a good subtle fic like this. I'll have to keep my eyes peeled for more.
Miss Tourmaline, I simply must applaud you for these stories, the creativity of them and of course your amazing talent as an writer with a such kinky mind and imagination. Now that I have read all the arc's (twice) and taken in all the twist and turns, I'm really expecting the next chapter to see what happens to Blank Slate at the Society, I have my own speculation's but, still looking forward to it. Keep up the good work and take care, Miss Tourmaline.
Oh, I must ask that can anyone just create an account on the Society's RP site? Could I join it?
oh wow, this is as amazing as the last two! although, this is getting alittle unhealthy for me, i have read all of this in the last three days, its addictive. its just so hard to find a good story like this, especially involving bondage, rape and masochism. please do more! i am a big fan
5674195 Yes you may. We are always looking for new members to join in the fun. Sometimes the forums are a little slow, but if you are patient you should be able to find a partner to play with. Just remember to play nice.
these tags are not what I think of when I think mind control
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Don't worry, it will come. Though any form of mind controlled sex is a form of rape, as you are doing it against the person/pony's will.
Well now look what we have here. Interesting start, not my particular cup of tea but still well done Schorl. But now time to fall back intothe shadows before I'm caught.
5477504
Too late, caught. And don't worry, there might be a bit more clop before the real meat of the story, but we will soon get into the good ol' plot elements you enjoy so much.
5477518 meh clop is fine I mean it is the EqTS universe, can't really expect it not to mix plot and clop....and Unintended innuendos ...and I am my captured...that was a tree
This is interesting... A bit different, but I can't wait for more!
So it's out! Wonderful, I love every instalment of your series^^
Though I expect this one won't rise into a positive score, due to the unforgivable sin of *gasp* male on male action.
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It's possible.... but hopefully people can see past that for the true story held within.
I'll admit, I don't like male on male, but I think I'll follow this, see where it goes and like give it an upvote for good measure, it's well written, it's flows well and it might prove interesting.
I have to say this beginning chapter had me giggling and squealing as I read. I also spotted two errors though I need to remember where they were I really enjoyed reading, great job and keep up the good work!!
Something about this reminds me of another fic by the name of Smoke. I do enjoy a good subtle fic like this. I'll have to keep my eyes peeled for more.
well this should be good having read the first and the sequel im looking forward to this one
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Agreed. Yay for our OCs! ❤❤❤
5502041 hehe yeah, very nice
Miss Tourmaline, I simply must applaud you for these stories, the creativity of them and of course your amazing talent as an writer with a such kinky mind and imagination. Now that I have read all the arc's (twice) and taken in all the twist and turns, I'm really expecting the next chapter to see what happens to Blank Slate at the Society, I have my own speculation's but, still looking forward to it.
Keep up the good work and take care, Miss Tourmaline.
Oh, I must ask that can anyone just create an account on the Society's RP site? Could I join it?
oh wow, this is as amazing as the last two! although, this is getting alittle unhealthy for me, i have read all of this in the last three days, its addictive. its just so hard to find a good story like this, especially involving bondage, rape and masochism. please do more! i am a big fan
5674195
Yes you may. We are always looking for new members to join in the fun. Sometimes the forums are a little slow, but if you are patient you should be able to find a partner to play with. Just remember to play nice.
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Thank you, Miss Tourmaline.
I was about to say that I always play nice, but I would lie if I said that.
Oh, god, not Freud.
Other than that, I think this is my first post in this series, so I'll use the rest of it to congratulate you on the writing.