*Chapter one and two have been edited to better suit the feedback given within the comments. The overall plot has remained the same.*
I've always liked change. It gives curiosity a chance to experience new and exhilarating ways to retry aspects in life. But when it comes to the point where physical or mental trauma are caused by the change, I draw an unswayable line. The very idea of pain from such a productive source shakes me to my very core, but I get through it. I've always gotten through it in the end and returned with a righteous determination, so what would prevent me from doing so now?
Huge thanks once again to apuppy120 for editing and currently being drawn cover art.
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If anything Jacob is the weird one. We understand he's supposed to be really good friends with the MC, but the reaction was just not strong enough, as if he expected something like this to happen, perhaps it's just that not enough detail went into explaining how he's really freaked out, but too tired to try and deal with it at midnight. Though he did make up a really good explanation to the teacher guy on the spot....
Interesting, so it will only be him transforming then?
Potential solution for the to-pony transform: get him to cast an ether collection spell on something to store magic in.
Keep going! ;)
"I will not have them denied from me."
sounds like somepony has autism~
OOC-ness of Luna and Celestia is driving me mad.
Thank you all very much for the feedback. I may edit this in the future to better suit the feedback you are suggesting. I am writing this for character practice after all, so I appreciate letting me know when one is out of character. As for the pacing and reactions, I will look into them as well. Again, thank you for the feedback.
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I agree with blaze rod and Samaru too. Celestia and Luna are shown to be monsters. By trying to overwrite his personality, Celestia was basically killing what makes Dan, Dan. A fate I would not wish even on Hitler. Though this could be good practice to write the mane 6 personalities, You should put up the Alternate Universe tag to warn readers some things might be way out of character.
5494414 alright, I will. Thank you for the feedback
...so what happens when someone likes being RD and breaking the sound barrier that they perposly trigger the transformation.
Either way good story mate! Don't abandon IT!
5638664 I won't abandon it, don't worry
I'm just in university at the moment so life is kinda busy. Also I don't always have ideas in my head on how I want to execute the next chapter or two, so that's why updates tend to have highly varied time between them. Anyways, thanks for the feedback, and I'll be sure to update when I can 
So, did he turn into Luna or Celestia?
Not only have they mastered their own element, but they have shown to have learned from each other as well. Thus, we believe forcing their physical and mental forms upon you after you disobey an Element of Harmony to be an exceptional way to teach you and your race. Keep in mind, each time you disobey a specific element, you will be stuck in the corresponding form for a longer and longer time.
So, you have Celestia and Luna playing jerks with a poor human kid?
Every time he lies, he will Become Applejack?
If he makes someone cry, he will become Pinkie Pie?
And so on?
Why does a single being has to be punished for his whole race?
I think I hate this story. Luna and Celestia are jerks, and the poor kid will keep being punished, as is impossible to live in the human world without lying or being greedy, and you cant' show kindness every-time.
Worse, he is in the human world, not Equestria! What do you think humans will do to a kid who turns into six different talking equines?
5798562 I'll be honest, I think I hate this story myself. The dialogue and personalities I have placed upon Celestia and Luna have felt very forced whenever I've wrote them, and it's caused writing this story to feel more like a chore than a hobby. The only real reason I started it is to get feedback on how celestia and Luna should be writin in terms of personality for practise with my first fic, though it's clear no circumstance will cause them to do what they did here. I thank you for the feedback, I agree with you entirely. I'll probably end up cancelling this story soon.
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You could change to it being Discord the one who causes the transformations, he would find it hilarious.
5801848 that's actually what I was thinking. It seems very much something he would do for entertainment, reformed or not.
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Doesn't even have to be reformed Discord, he could have done it while he got free in season 2, and before they seal him back again.
Once Discord is sealed, our poor kid ends becoming a fusion of the mane six due to Discord no longer maintaining the spell and because is chaos magic. Good thing, no more painful transformations, bad thing, she is stuck as a fake alicorn filly with the power of six ponies.
5802555 I like it. Thanks for the advice. I'll probably just rewrite chapter 2 and edit chapter 1 to have discord instead. Again, thank you.
You know, regardless of whether I would want to be a pony or not, I would still argue against what happened. Luna and Celestia are interfering with another's life in a horrible way. I mean, I can see them doing it--they would want to help another world try to become peaceful--but I can't see the protagonist accepting what happened. He basically just let another being take away his humanity and personality. That just doesn't happen unless Luna and/or Celestia did something to force him to accept it.
Anyways, it's exciting regardless. I'd like to see more.
Its a shame this project is doomed to fail. The moment he begins speaking the government is going to swoop down and do horrible experiments. When they find out about the sisters they will experience such fear that they will attempt to destroy them using proganda to insight hatted and find a way to send armies to equestria. There is no way this ends well.
But prove me wrong
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seriously? Yellow fur, pink mane. Who’s that?
I have to ask: Will he transform into the other mane 6 or just Fluttershy? Or will he meet other people who will transform into the other mane 6? PM me if it is too spoilery. I actually enjoy a story at lot more if I'm given some spoilers. Though i am among a few who enjoys getting some spoilers as i get to imagine where and how the spoiler takes place. Which is why i asked you to PM me