Brony and Halo fan with a lot of interest in sci-fi and vampire/vampony fics.
For the Achievement Hunters, It was a normal day at the office, but that was all to change when a newbie painted his GTA car like Rainbow Dash. They find themselves in the Equestria Girls Universe with a vampire among them and the Mad King, who's returned for good.
Achievement Hunter is part of Roosterteeth
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Nice dude
Thanks. Glad you like it.
5467605 is there more?
Yes there will be more, just need time to think of ideas.
There was another achievement hunter fic a while ago that was so bad it was good. It got cancelled through because the author wasn't crap and didn't want to be seen by us bad work. Have you, by any chance, read it? Or was this a spur of the moment thing.
Edit: well, my advice to you is to either get someone to give you advice or make it so obviously bad and self-inserty it's good. No offence but your dialogue and descriptions are terrible. It looks like something my little sister wold write (but with Stampy replaced by Achievement Hunters).
Sorry it disappointed you, but constructive criticism is welcome. Oh and I've read a few and can't remember which one it was. I think it might just have been a spur of the moment thing. Will try to get better discriptions in the next chapter though.
If anyone would like to give me ideas and be my editor, PM me and I'll see what I can do to get the chapters to you before they're submitted.
5467822 Try and find me the name of the fic. I'm not sure I've read it though.
the mad king? from Xray and Vav?
5472135 Well I originally did him from let's play Minecraft as you can see he wants Edgar. I have seen him in X-ray and Vav.
5474973 oh, okay. Now I get it. I just saw x ray and vav. So... that's the first thing that popped up
THEY LEFT WITHOUT SAYING BYE OR SORRY.......THATS HARSH
5480121 Soz mate, but as you know, they are eager to see Twi return, so how could they not.
I'm renaming this fic as I have an idea for my OC vampire to go on a bloodlust and so the Achievement Hunters become vampire slayers to stop him and his special someone. (I'll give you a clue: sleep all day, party all night; and no it's not Pinkie)
5480469 yes it is
No it isn't so I'll give you another: wub, wub.
where's the next chapter
5528220 Trying to get more ideas and juggling three more stories so may not be another one for a while. Can't say when though.
5528224 oh and btw it's Vinyl Scratch
5528227 *clap, clap, clap, clap* We have winner folks. Optimus Prime gives you an internet and a pat on the back.
5528233 YUS
Why does this have a gore tag, but not a dark tag?
5698012 Maybe I didn't want to add one. It's my story, you can't tell me what to do!!
Idea, is great, how you write, not so much, the entire entry to the story is way to sped up and unrealistic. I mean, I know it's not gonna be realistic but you gotta put something there besides a just "sure you're part of the crew", along with the whole Gav friend thing. Just go over your story more, add details, make sure it makes at least a bit sense. But you know, your story not mine.
5711492 Thanks for the advice.
I'll consider it, but as you said: my story not yours.
5712274 i noticed your story started by saying you went to rtx 2015 this year did you actually go there i did and it was awesome