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Eeeeh. I like the idea but it's so out of character for Rarity to do that to Rainbow.
Now if Rarity simply got carried away "Caring" for the petrified pony and accidentally caused her to be trapped for longer. That would be better.
As it stands this needs the Dark tag.
I'm torn here. On the one hand, there are no spelling or grammar problems i can see. On the other hand, this story was rapey and demeanin and hearing Rainbow Dash beg in my mind made me sad.
Romance tag? seriously? get the fuck out of here
There we go - I've removed the 'Romance' tag and added the 'Dark', and added 'Sad' to be on the safe side.
Sorry I got that wrong the first time around!
Is this story supposed to be flagged as complete already, or is there more coming?
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My original plan was for it to be longer. When I was writing it I was a little frustrated at how it came out, though, and ended up cutting it short to focus on other things.
I didn't really expect 18 people to like it when I uploaded it. Perhaps I was too critical of my own work. Maybe I'll revisit it in a week or two and add some more chapters.
Did a reading of this fic, it can be found at
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n0FVUpKj2EE
Enjoy if you can
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Oooh, thankyou for the reading! I've tweeted it up so hopefully people that like the fic will go and check out your reading :)
I wouldn't mind seeing more to be honest.
Yeah, this needs a sequel that takes place after RD returns to normal and she gets back at Rarity for doing this.
Because this just does NOT seem like something Rarity would do.
I know one has to have suspension of disbelief when it comes to how characters behave in fanfiction, especially clop, but this is WAY over the line.