After being banished by the Elements of Harmony, Nightmare Moon returns. She tracks down Luna, and the princess of the night must face her greatest nightmare alone.
I'm the type of pony nopony really knows. :P
After being banished by the Elements of Harmony, Nightmare Moon returns. She tracks down Luna, and the princess of the night must face her greatest nightmare alone.
It was good
But you could've done a bit better on the fighting in my opinon
Also FIRST!!!!
I always wanted to type that
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This was written over the last few hours, while simultaneously gaming with a group of friends. It was one of those, "I have this idea that needs to get written down now," situations. Now my muse is clear to resume working on Stormy Skies.
EDIT:
Which isn't to say I don't plan on making some edits to improve this story.