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Just some random pegasister who stalks you... Oh and loves you too


Rainbow Dash and Soarin want to have a bear as a pet. Well Rainbow does, and Soarin, well not too much....
But they will get her dream pet together as best friends, right?

*Just something i wrote on my free time. Please dont hate, but instead enjoy!*

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Comments ( 20 )

That was rather cute. I guess it made me smile so that's gotta be worth something!

There were a few grammatical errors here and there but nothing mind boggling.


Were ten now!

Should be

We're ten now!

Keep up the good work :)

5469661 awww thanks!! And thanks for pointing that out.:twilightsmile:

Short and sweet.
Some minor errors here and there. Otherwise it's pretty good.

I'd love to see more stories with the two of them as foals! This was sweet!

Totally adorable. A couple spelling errors and places where apostrophes were missing, but other than that it was well written. Great job! :twilightsmile:

5470247 I'm planning to do more of them as foals soon...:raritywink:

Let's get dangerous. I bet you can't guess that reference.

5473699 I gotta say I am surprised someone got that.

Nahhh, it's not lame at all. You did great. It's really cute and sweet. I wish you'll do something like this one more! And you forgot some " and spelling errors. :rainbowkiss:

5474437 The show is getting popular again and I research cartoons from any area.

5802929 thank you sweetheart!!:raritywink:

For any creature that can fly, flying away from danger is going to be an autonomic response. You won't forget.


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