Two Pegasi Sisters
Once upon a time, in the small village of Canterlot, there were two pegasi sisters. Their names were Fluttershy and Cadence. They were the best of friends.
Cadence was the oldest, eighteen years old. She was a beautiful pegasus with a pink fur coat and wings. She had big and beautiful purple eyes that shined whenever she laid a smile. On her flank, laid a crystal-like heart for a cutie mark. The heart represented her ability to spread love to everypony around her no matter who they were.
The mare, however, had a uniquely colored mane. Her mane were the colors of purple, pink, and yellow; her tail as well. Her hair was done up in a little messy ponytail. This was the way she wore it most of the time, especially when foalsitting any of the fillies or colts in the village.
Cadence loved children. She loved children as much as she loved her own sister. She was always so great with them. All of the little fillies and colts seemed to love her in return; always wanting to help her and have her and her sibling play with them.
Speaking of her sibling, this brings us to her sister. Fluttershy is the youngest, she was 16. She was a very beautiful pegasus as well. She had a pale yellow fur coat and wings. She had hypnotizing teal eyes that made you feel as if you were lost in the ocean whenever you were to gaze into them. Her mane and tail were about the same color as her sister's fur coat, if not, a little lighter.
Her hair was done in such a way that it fit almost to the shape of her face. Her tail was a little long that it happened to drag a bit on the ground whenever she walked around. She didn't seem to mind, though.
Her final feature was her cutie mark. On her flank was a cutie mark where three little pink butterflies lay. The butterflies symbolized Fluttershy's love for taking care and communicating with animals. She loved animals just like Cadence loved children. Her cutie mark also symbolized the kindness that she would spread whenever she help a poor, defenseless animal. Or even a local villager.
Everypony in the village wondered how to these two ponies seemed to play off each other so well. One sister showing love while the other showed kindness. Two similar concepts born from the same blood. Not only that, but every single villager was taken aback from their beauty.
They were the two most beautiful mares in the whole entire village. Every single young stallion has been asking either one of them for the time of day. However, they politely rejected each and every gentlecolt caller, simply explaining that they were not ready for such a thing, as of yet.
Though they were all slightly disappointed, they could not help but be impressed with their very mature responses. They would give them both a gentle bow, before trotting away, back to their homes.
The two sisters would watch them leave, waving goodbye. Looking at each other from the corner of their eyes, giggling.
The two siblings were interrupted by the sound of whistling, coming from a few yards away. They turned their heads, looking over their shoulders. The pegasus sisters looked around until they spotted a elder stallion of their particular species.
This Pegasus was a male with a pale cyan-colored fur coat and wings. His mane and tail was a dark, almost navy, blue. He had eyes, the color of green. A green color just like an emerald. His cutie mark was a yellow lightening bolt with wings.
"Girls, it's time for dinner," the elder stallion shouted, waving his left hoof, signaling for them to come in the house.
Cadence and Fluttershy looked at each other, saddened that it was time to leave their good friends for the day.
"Yes, father," they both said in unison.
The two both began to flap their wings. A breeze hitting the bottom of their wings with each flap. Both of their wings began to lift the sisters off of the ground, each flap going against the force of the air.
Cadence and Fluttershy began to fly toward the little cottage they call home. A few of the fillies and little animals waving goodbye, for they won't see them again until the next day.
As they were about to land in front of the house, a voice from next door caught Cadence's ear.
"Oh, Cadence, dear," said the voice. "Would you mind foalsitting Pound Cake and Pumpkin Cake tomorrow?"
The pink Pegasus looked over to see a blue earth pony mare with a dark and light pink swirly mane and tail. She gave her a great white smile. "Of course, Mrs. Cake. I would love to foalsit the twins."
Mrs. Cake let out a sigh of relief, "Oh, thank you so much, dearest. Oh, and Fluttershy! How have you been, sweetie?"
The young pony blushed a little, "Oh, I'm fine, Mrs. Cake," she told her. "Tell Mr. Cake I said 'Hello.'"
"I will, dear. Goodbye," the mare said, before returning inside.
The two pegasi waved goodbye before trotting inside their little cottage. Their father, Soarin', gave both his daughters each a kiss on the forehead as they came through the door.
The stallion closed the door behind him, a creaking sound being made as he did. He then flew over to the kitchen table where his children were sitting. On the table was a bowl for all three of them. Each bowl held about a ladle's worth of carrot and spinach soup. Beside each bowl was a glass of apple juice.
"How was your day today, girls?" he asked, blowing of his soup before taking a spoonful.
"Today was just great, father," Cadence responded.
"Oh, yes. Today was just great. We played with some of the little fillies and colts," Fluttershy said.
"We even fed some of the animals in the village square," Cadence added.
Soarin' smiled. It made him so happy to see his two precious daughters enjoying themselves. It made him even happier that they both have been spreading love and kindness all throughout the village. Oh, how their mother would've been proud.
"Oh, father! Would you tell us a story?"
The stallion looked up from his meal to his eldest, the spoon only making it halfway toward his mouth. He set the spoon back down gently in the bowl. "A story?"
"Oh, yes! That's a wonderful idea, sis! Would you tell us a story, father?" Fluttershy asked, giving him the puppy-dog eyes.
Now, how can I say "no" to that? he thought to himself. "Oh, very well. But you'll have to wait until tomorrow."
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i can actually get down with this idea~
i needed a mellow, calm story to soothe my violent mind a bit
bravo my good mare, bravo
The bubbliness is over nine thousand and the cuteness factor of Cadence and Flutters being sisters made my heart explode twice~
5458372 happy you like it so far
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5458886 I haven't thought about who their mother might be yet.
I made Soarin' their father because he was the ONLY male Pegasus I could think of.....
5458918 Yeah, Soarin's the one that popped into my mind immediately.
Oh, I like this. It's something I haven't really seen before. (Although it does remind me a bit of Monochromatic's Enchanted Library. The trapped princess part does, at least, and the fairytale.)
You should work a bit on the execution, though. I'd recommend an edito and/or prereader if you can, because I saw quite a few errors and it doesn't really flow at some points. You have a strong start, though, so keep it up!
5459038 Oh, there were??? I'm going to have to go back and check, then.
5459044 Okay. But I'd still recommend a pre-reader or editor, because it's always good to have a fresh set of eyes.
5459060 would you like to be the pre-reader????
I only asked since you suggested I get one
5459067 I'll be really busy once school starts on Monday, so I wouldn't realistically be able to do anything during that time, except for some weekends. Sorry.
There are groups and the like dedicated to that sort of thing, though, so you can always check there.
5459071 Alright, I'll go and look
5459082 Oki-dokes.
Cool story can not wait for more
5461937 thanks. I just don't undestand whyy so many people are just giving it a thumbs down based on the first chapter
OK u have got me interested!!!!!!
I like the idea of Fluttershy and Cadence being sisters
BTW, Hello Kitty scares me.
5524947 You're not alone. My sister and I used to share a bedroom together and she had this Hello Kitty poster which felt like she was staring at me while I slept.
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Wow. Creepy. I have personally had no interaction with Hello Kitty.
Aww! Cadence and Flutters! This is going to be good, I can tell.