Danny Roger; a 16 year old brony; wishes upon a star to see the world of Equestria. After being hit by a truck, he suddenly woke up in Equestria. Not as him self but as his OC
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TerminatorPON47
If u see a red sand which on the floor don't eat it it's call a Big Mac made buy pinky pie. If u get the joke I will join your ground or thread :)
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Sup hope u injoy this story
Calling b8 here.
5466123 WHAT I DONT KNOW WHAT DID U SAY
5466130 wow gr8 fkn story srsly m8 go on i wwish to reed moar
5466140 WHAT THE HECK DID U SAY PLZ TALk ENGLISH DUde
Note for you, author: some people here will insta-downvote you because you used a pony creator image.
And if they do read your story, isn't it a wee bit dangerous for you to make a Gary Stu? Oh well, just don't make him too unbelievably OP that it becomes ridiculous
5466156 Wow, excellent story. Please, do go on as I'd love to read more. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
5466159 WHOS GARY SU??????? and dont worry red blade will not return till i say so (No it will not be in chapter 2)and ill change the cover art now
5466163 "We'll be counting the stars"? Is that the name?
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Asking me to give you an OC pony? Oh well... I'll just come up with one on the spot then
Name: Fade Away
female unicorn
black splotch as a cutie mark.
My reaction was something like this GIF
gifsforum.com/images/gif/facepalm/grand/star-trek-picard-facepalm-eccbc87e4b5ce2fe28308fd9f2a7baf3-1381.gif
combined with this.
i3.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/facebook/000/207/234/you-must-be-new-here-willy-wonka.jpg
So, like this.
i.imgur.com/pgNButD.jpg
What a twist, being hunted by ponies. That's never been done before.
But really, I'm not sure how to feel about this. It feels like wish-fufillment, but it has a certain charm to it. You've made a Gary Stu, but I don't hate her. The writing isn't that good, but your grammar is mostly alright.
I'll track it and see where it goes.
5467372 The edginess… It's painful…
I didn't.
This story completely destroyed pacing, English and originality.
'0/10 would not read again' - IGN
'I'll rekk you m9 i swer on me mum' - Snipars
your grammar and spelling... ITS FUCKING HORRIBLE, how old are you, 8?
5467345 yep first story ever in my life
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5468738
Look I know u hate me but at least I tried
This is my first story so can u plz tell me where the Bad grammar is so I can fix it thanks
5468459 you write like a three year old so
http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=tAk0LTTbr8w
5467244 I deleted the second chapter cuz it was really bad
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5469119
Aw, why not?
5469169 Gotta love that hemhorrhoid vore.
5469249 You realise I was making fake quotes right? Learn what quotation marks are.
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5469416 ok so U liked my story because I'm my apinyon my grammar in this story was good and no I'm not 8
5468738 that's funny a 3 year old calling me a 8 year old But ok if u want to call me 8 then so be it
There ten million particules in the universe that we can up serve yo ma ma took the ugly ones And put them into one nerd
Aka 5468738
5471876 You obviously don't understand MLGspeak or regular english. I - did - not - like - this - story. There, is that simple enough? Learn to stop using text speak and use actual proper English. Text speech is for when you are chatting with people, not a fanfiction website.
5471866 It's just to show that he's the alpha male. Tsk, what are you, a degenerate beta? I won the contest fair and square, so Night Fang should be in the story. You wanna know what we call it here in God's very own United States of America when people take away all competition and make it so that the state decides who gets a soccer trophy and who doesn't, boy? COMMUNISM. And on top of that, as an Onionsexual Banana Ogrekin, I take your hurtful and oppressive comments towards sexuality very personally and demand that you immediately cease and desist before I email the JIDF. Shrek your privilege, shitlord.
It's everywhere. Hope that helps.
5472235 look dude if I offended u in any way I'm sorry. I am not ageinst gays, one of my best freinds is a lesbian so I'll will erase all of my mean comments but please don't write inappropriate stuff in the comments and plz don't sue me I only have like 23 bucks
EDIT. read comment uptop
ps my freind told me Onionsexual Banana Ogrekin means gay.
but if it dose not then sorry for calling u gay
5472738 u now what I'll just delete this story cuz I worked hard to make this story
and all I've gotten is hate and threats so I will soon erase this story and stop writing this story and all story's 
So good bye that's my last chapter so later gators
I should have not lisend to my freind to become a brony 
5473635 Uh, hey, me again. I'm assuming you aren't a troll for this, and if you are, hats off to you for convincing me otherwise. Anyway, why you've gotten "nothing but hate" is because you've responded why unnecessary hate yourself. I said that I would track it, I kept my word. However, you seem to think that everyone is out to get you. Here's a tip: Get an editor. Maybe then people will stop "harassing", and I use that term lightly, you.
ok dude Im trying to get an editor but I can't find one how or ware do I get an editor????
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5485885 Why, in the Looking for Editors group, of course. All of the rules are detailed on the front page.
thanks
I now follow you
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5485911 Thank you.
OK this is how it works i suck at stories and had to make a totally new account because i was hated so much. My advice is to slow everything down a notch. Like the first couple paragraphs if you add more detail in there and make it a bit longer it can be a chapter all in itself. Also making a OC OP character is a bad idea to do. I mean if you show that he is powerful then you do it slowly not all in one place. Also make it so that the power has a time limit or a weakness.
P.S. I recommend not saying its a OC as well as expanding the description of the story a bit.
P.S.S I will like and follow you on your updates.
P.S.S.S remember to just slow down, The people that read stories on fimfiction love suspense more then anything in the word. Not kidding at all. Blueball them into liking you.
5485943 I had to put the of red blade and the other oc in this story with those powers cuz they were the request of the 2 winners of my YouTube channel challenge
First place got a djpon3 plush
Second place got there oc with 2 powers of there choce in my fic
And third place just gets there OC in my story
So that's y this is an oc story
5485943 the challenge ended on the first day of 2015 at 12.00 am
It was for....best mlp animations
Dis I like
But take it a bit slower though
I shall now wait for the next chapter