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Brother Uriel


Ayyy, welcome to my account, not much to see other then one story so... yeah, enjoy it or don’t, it’s up to you.

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Tigerclaw is your ordinary Kahjiit only he's the Dragonborn and wears Dadric armor, he's kind hearted but if betrayed or misled he will hold nothing back in his anger, his life became... Dull after sometime but after a mishap with a spell he was found everything changes when he lands in the world of Equestria, This story is about Tigerclaw my character I made in Skyrim he's teleported to Equestria by the book in the first episode, he needs to find a way back to his world by any means necessary... Or will he fall in battle like countless other Warriors?
(All references go to their respective owners I own nothing but the character I made.)

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Is this a combination of Warriors by Erin Hunter, Skyrim, and My Little Pony? If it is, my life has been complete. Those are three of my favorite things. Like and a favorite, good sir.

Comment posted by Brother Uriel deleted Jan 4th, 2015
Comment posted by Brother Uriel deleted Jan 4th, 2015

5463426 Yes it is also that name is very bad luck I have learned this through past experience and Tigerclaw does have some old personality traits as well as my own I hope you enjoy it and it will get pretty random at one point.

Skyrim belongs to the Nords.

also learn to paragraph plz

5465699 that's what they say but yet they let a Khajeet like me live there which isn't very smart.

One quick question, is Tigerclaw named after the former deputy and leader of ThunderClan????? Like from the book series Warriors??????????

5500491 Yes he is but he isn't that bad... Unless angry... Also that name is BAD LUCK! So don't use it unless you want things to be more of a challenge :twilightsmile:

Omg lol hey dude its me I got an account too ~Duma

5514568 Greetings madam, I am one of the many Space Marines in the Ranks of The Legion of the Damned and if you fight against the impereom you will burn in the flames of the warp... Fair warning

Hmm... could use some commas here and there. And the sentences are kinda large and a pain to read... if I read them aloud, that is. Hmm... it has potential, but...

King Davy: Tigerclaw's not badass enough. I could kill him with my hands tied behind my back while being blindfolded at the same time. No, I could kill him in my sleep.

Now now, Davy, don't be rude. And threatening isn't nice, nor is going on about how a character lacks badassery. If I may, and I'm talking to you, Tigerclaw, I do believe I know a certain Dovahkiin that could help you with your current problems. Two of them, actually. All this story needs is a little cleaning and it could be one of the greats. At least it's only two chapters so far...

I know I've been two places of the dead

"Two" should be to.

Khajeet

It's actually spelled "Khajiit"

Tamrial

Spelled "Tamriel"

had his assistants lived in smaller ones

Should be "living"

Just a small, SMALL list of the errors in this chapter alone. Not to be a complete Grammar Nazi about it, but seriously, some things need to change.

5806769 Yeah I just need an editor... Badly... Plus the third one is coming along... And kinda not easy... I get sidetracked a lot!... But... Maybe I shouldn't ask this but... Would you mind if you edited? I mean... You seem you know what to do and me?... Not so much... But if your too busy and or just don't want to, that's fine... I just wanted to ask... But if you could, you'd be pretty high on my cool dudes list which I'll be making on my Profile :pinkiehappy: but again, your choice :raritywink:... Also Tigerclaw's wimpy compared to you King Davy... But you just have to wait for when he uses one of his certain shouts he got... It will be fun then :pinkiecrazy: on a side note... Those Timberwolves aren't dead... Everybody knows that they don't die that easily.

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King Davy: Shouts or not, I'd mop the floor with Tigerclaw's ass! I dismantled an entire country of mages, so what ever it is Tigerclaw can muster, I can take care of it!

I'd happily be your editor. I haven't exactly been an editor before but... yes, I do know what I'm doing. Years of writing down stories has done wonders on my ability to make quality stories that are proper in terms of grammar and punctuation. Just tell me whenever you're ready for some editing, and you do whatever it is you do to have an editor, and I'll make the proper changes. I also see some potential opportunies of another kind... like merging of characters into stories. If not, no harm done! But if you would be interested in that sort of thing... all the better!

5812526 Hey I'm up for anything but I thank you greatly for being my editor but... Do you know how to send things to people to edit on this site? I've been wondering for awhile and haven't had the chance to ask anyone.

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What I'm thinking is that you should edit the story. By this I mean by pressing the "edit" button and what you saw when you started the story will pop up. Just below "long description" there will be a box that says "unpublished view password". To my understanding you'll have to enter a password into that box, and after that I'm not sure. I'm guessing there'll be a button somewhere on the story that would let me edit once you give me the password. I'm assuming this is how it works, so do your thing then... well... you'll have to private message me or somethin'. Otherwise just giving it to me in the comments section would... it wouldn't end well, if I know anything about people.