A Little Loopy - a Moonlit song

This story is a sequel to A little loopy.

An Alt event line to A little loopy.

When Sweetie Belle, Stuck in a time loop for Celestia knows how long, Meets Moonlight, A unicorn who makes outrageous claims about time magic. Trouble is soon to follow as they both try to escape the time loop.

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Chapter 1: Still not Saturday. L??? · 31st Dec 2014 · 1,193 words
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Chapter 2: Tusaday will brake you heart · 1st Jan 2015 · 1,037 words
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Chapter 3: Ctrl,alt,temporal reset to manehatten · 2nd Jan 2015 · 1,328 words
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Chapter 4: Temporal ex Machina · 3rd Jan 2015 · 734 words
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hailspider

hailspider #1 · Jan 1st, 2015 · · · Chapter 1: Still not Saturday. L??? ·

outrages clams

I think you mean "outrageous claims".

Gamer_KM

Gamer_KM #2 · Jan 1st, 2015 · · · Chapter 1: Still not Saturday. L??? ·

5447207 Nope The Clams she makes are outraged to be there.....

I'll Fix it.

The Fiction Fanatic

The Fiction Fanatic #3 · Jan 3rd, 2015 · 1 · · Chapter 4: Temporal ex Machina ·

This is a good story but you may want to get an editor

Mewaponny

Mewaponny #4 · Jan 3rd, 2015 · · · Chapter 2: Tusaday will brake you heart ·

.i think I was you" Sweetie said, Looking into Moonlight's eyes, "I felt....dirty, there was pain."
Moonlight Trotted over, the smile was no longer on her face, Moonlight Got close to Sweetie there noises where almost touching. "That was when I was a filly, a dark alicorn ,By the name of Dusk, attacked me and my family, i am so sorry you had to see that, i thought i could try to dream walk with you, but sadly i think i may have just planted a memory into you"

.I think I was you" Sweetie said, Looking into Moonlight's eyes, "I felt....dirty, there was pain."
Moonlight Trotted over, the smile was no longer on her face. Moonlight Got close to Sweetie, their noses almost touching. "That was when I was a filly. A dark alicorn , by the name of Dusk, attacked my family and I. I am so sorry you had to see that. I thought I could try to dream walk with you, but sadly I think I may have just planted a memory into you."