This sneaky fox, always clad in a blue mask and gloves, has long been a bane of unwary travelers with loose accouterments.
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- strokes beard - Hmmm. This... was pretty good. - FrostBite
I mean, in the storywise sense. I mean... err... ;3
I don't know what the hell I just read.
But I feel like shooting my self for reading it.
Why does twilight have a NEW study room? What happened to the old one? Do I want to know?
What is this I have seen, on my computer screen....
this was sweet
i liked
and it did blow of some steam
if you know what i mean
Spike and Sweetie Belle? I have GOT to read this story.
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Thanks!
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She's turned the old one into a video-gaming den. It's referred to in 'My Little Humie: Fanfiction is Social' (or maybe it's in the as-yet-unreleased chapter of that story).
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Tee-hee
Well I gotta say, that was pretty good. It's a shame there isn't more Spike X Sweetie Belle stories out there, but maybe the couple will gain popularity. Good job.
Well done, a bit to sappy for me, but hey, what are you gonna do?
529397 Oh man, they are everywhere. I'm probably one of the few that hasn't wrote one... yet. Also, good job author.
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"Gooby"
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Everytime you say it, I have to post a picture.
Also I'll begin reading in about 10 minutes :P
Really well done. Nice, sweet, emotional and SweetieSpike. I liked it felt real genuine.
nice story. i did feel like kinda pedo at one point but then i read the ending
529356 xxX1337sparkl3mag3Xxx
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I'm sorry that you feel that way. I know that the age thing is messy, but I was really going for a "pure heart's true love" moment.
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heh
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Oh, sappy is my thing. I tend to be of the "if you have sex with someone, you must really love them first" philosophy in my writings. Glad to you liked it.
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Hmmm... what do you mean by that image?
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damn it swiper, you've done it again!
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Floali alert! *trolled*
Ok other than that, you did good yet again with your fantastic writing skills. Emotions played out nicely, Details above average, and plot was... well it was based as a sort of continuation of something with an excellent plot so I guess that was ok too... for a clop fic.
BTW... I claimz teh patents of the words: Floali, foali, floli, foaloli and foaly! I madez dem! (to the best of my knowledge)
feel free to use them but I just felt like attempting to start a lingo term!
530844 Dude waht i mean dawg its fucking awsome possom how doesen't like jack daniles poured on i greazys tomato fat burrito?!?!?!?!?
well made fic if i have to say so myself but i cant stop thinking if
oh screw it it was beautiful
fuck me dude i gave you the taco pic, and then you go and fucking dislike my story you don't have to do shit to it
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Yay, bacon
Well, dude, you wanted honest reviews and comments and I felt like I just had to be real
even though this is messed up as all clopfics are (i try to avoid them), especially since they're pretty much children, i have to admit this is a pretty good story that was well written. Good job.
Great, but didn't synch up with 'the price of rejection' at all
MOAR
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Have you read it?
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Thank you!
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I know the age of consent line is a messy thing here, but-- again-- I hoped that people could overlook that and see it as a pure-hearted romance. I'm glad that you guys like it.
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And...
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Thank you too!
"He knelt down, his paws going through his hair." I think spines might be the more appropriate word. Also when I picture spike with hair, he only has dreads.
"Sapphire bubble gum," What does it taste like?
Also I have a suggestion, How about a story following their Relationship. What you've set up here is perfect, I believe other would agree with me that they'd love to see where it went. (Maybe taking place 5 - 10 years in the future or possibly continued from this point but them trying to keep it a secret from the others)
Thanks for reading!
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I'm not too familiar with spines... aren't they made of compressed hair? Can't they be trimmed like hair?
I guess I could tweak that.
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Drink a mint tea while chewing your standard pink, double-bubble kind of gum and then suck on a jewel that has that metallic, flat taste of jewels... there's the taste. Good for ponies and dragons alike.
That's a pretty good idea story-wise. The problem is that this Spike-Sweetie romance plot has been done so many times. I dunno where I could go with it.
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It has? Wow, now I feel out of touch. Though I guess since my comfort zone tends to be the Royals, I don't really know what goes on down bellow.
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What would you want to see in a story between a grown-up Sweetie Belle and her life-partner Spike? Curious...
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On a Comedic level, the Children.
On a serious level I'd like to see how their relationship grew, how everyone reacted to it. Personally, I wouldn't want to see Sweeties mortality come into play, but I can't speak for others. In the end though, I just want to see more Sweetie and Spike, there just isn't enough of the two and you've already proven yourself more than capable of making it work.
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I see. I'll think about.
P.S. So, can you please read "Gooby Floopy Pancakes"?
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I'll have to do that tomorrow evening, I honestly have to go to bed.
Edit: I almost forgot, but I caught my mistake before I shut everything down.
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Great stor-OH GOD Dolan has taken FIMFiction.net there is no hope.
not bad + =
He tried to savor things as much as he could, moving slowing. Yet the pleasure almost seemed to burn inside of him.
Movement slowing, perhaps?
Also, I'm really conflicted about this fic. I mean, this is good, no question about that. It's just that the whole underage pony clopping thing? Eh...
It makes me feel better if I imagine the two as being slightly older than depicted in the show.
Regardless, very nice work!
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Oh noes!
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Thanks!
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I'll edit that, thanks.
And don't feel bad about the story. It's love being consummated. What could be wrong with that?
d'awwww what a sweet story. i want moar like this!!!
+ =
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Yes, it's love being consummated. And no, I don't feel bad about it... It's just... I know this is a good story. It's sweet, and it's well written. It's a grade A story!
There's just that tiny part in me that, despite how well you've handled the matter, still doesn't quite feel comfortable about the fact that Spike and Sweetie Belle are, well... kinda young.
But pay it no mind, that's what I do. Like I said, you handled it in such a way that, were I to read it again, would thumbs-up it again in a second
Again, good job!
u here alphex? :?D
547038 bro if you spam this chat with your meth filled comments I'm going to kill you comment on my blog dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Sweetie_Belle.png
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Fuck yea
God save our queen
547053 I'm a king not a Queen fuck tard dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Rainbow_Dash.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Rainbow_Dash_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Rainbow_Dash_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Rainbow_Dash_lolface.png
547056 i didn't mean you fuckcunt
547112 yes u did dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Spike_lolface.png
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547116 i meant the british queen clitface
What did I just read?
I read a SWETTIESPIKE NUMPTY dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Sweetie_Belle.png Anyway. Great clop. I not seen a Spike Shipping in a while. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Spike_lolface.png
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Glad that you like it!