A Dangerous Sparkle

by David Silver

Disclaimer

Legal Stuff:

Twilight, Spike, and many other terms/names/places native to the show My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic are property of Hasbro. They are used without consent for this work of transformative parody. Hasbro gives no endorsement to the contents of this fiction.

Dawn Event, Everglow, Kadiston and similar terms from Ponyfinder are property of Silver Games LLC, and is used with consent under the fanfiction license offered on http://forum.ponyfinder.net.

Please don't sue me.

Thank you,
David Silver
AKA Rough Draft

Author's Note:

Just a little legal stuff to get it out of the way.

Comments

[PrismShift]

...well this is embarressing; It didn't occur to me you were that David Silver. It is an honor to have had you respond to me. The story is still coming along wonderfully. Great work on everything, the fanfiction and the RPG.

[David Silver]

5444459 A pleasure to meet you. This fanfic has been bouncing around in my skull for a while, yearning to be written. It is also nice to highlight the differences in the universes, as well as where they are similar. Twilight is a prime vessel for that.

A chance to do an Equestria Girls without all the failings therein is also satisfying. Stranger in a strange land can be a tricky theme to play right.

[terrycloth]

5460478 Why wouldn't it tingle? The tingle means it's working!

It seemed like a reasonable response. The people who were only at the sermon to be healed got healed and left.

[terrycloth]

5463843 Well, if you're forcing me to criticize it... Twilight's always seemed very ruthless against enemies that she classifies as monsters, with or without justification. Eg, Pinkie Clones.

[David Silver]

5465756 Which they did, but they had a dead corpse there. That never happened before. The clones were sent away.

[David Silver]

5465756 PS: You seem to respond in the wrong chapter? I'm not sure how that happens.

[Spiritus Arcane]

Holy crap, a Ponyfinder crossover!

....FINALLY!

[David Silver]

5849928 Welcome to the herd!

[Kauetheadventurer246]

I have no clue what pony finder is but I am going to enjoy it!

[David Silver]

6620495 I do hope so, enjoy! Ponyfinder is a game I've released that is Pathfinder (which itself Dungeons and Dragons), but with more ponies and a unique world attached.

[Vutava]

I can't wait to see Twilight's reaction to Princess Luminance (as well as the other deities).

[Shadow Lance]

6620569 so to make it clear, your the owner of silver games?

[David Silver]

7029082 That's me!

[Wildfiretiremile]

Please don't sue me.

If you where gonna be sued this entire website wouldint exist

[David Silver]

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The website doesn't sell material books, but I've been in the business for years now.

[DeathKing]

You earned a like just for the Disclaimer.

[David Silver]

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I do what I can.

[Greenstaroftheplane]

10116905
Thank goodness, I'm not the only one.

[Victor07]

I had marked this story to read later and finally decided to read it, I like your stories, let's see where this one goes

[David Silver]

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Welcome to this, my first story on this site.