The two held the kiss for but a moment before Apple Bloom broke slightly away and muttered, “But we’re cousins.” Babs paused for a moment as fear raced through her. “I… I don’t care. I love you.”
This should be two paragraphs. One speaker per paragraph is the old rule of thumb.
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Is this a feature of anthro characters? Just kidding.
Ha, you thought there might be something important here!
Double doors.
This should be two paragraphs. One speaker per paragraph is the old rule of thumb.
Is this a feature of anthro characters? Just kidding.