A trade with Maud

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Teeemu

Teeemu #1 · Dec 30th, 2014 · 2 · ·

I honestly never envisioned Maud Pie as a pony who would do things like that but oh well... Different strokes. Okay errors aside i found it a pretty fun read. You were detailed enough for it to be enjoyable as the descriptive parts were where they needed to be. Keep it up an I'm sure you'll get the hang of it.

Lastly. grammatical errors can kill a story for me and many others so be sure to nail them down before posting regardless of how quick your story took you or time of day. It shows professionalism. Edit your errors before posting. Every time!

The_New_Pony

The_New_Pony #2 · Dec 30th, 2014 · · ·

5441906 Thank you, I'll take these words to heart.

Seto Kaiba

Seto Kaiba #3 · Dec 31st, 2014 · · ·

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DJ VinylScratch

DJ VinylScratch #4 · Dec 31st, 2014 · 1 · ·

Now THAT was a good clopfic!

Oatmeal Beast

Oatmeal Beast #5 · Jan 1st, 2015 · · ·

Not bad. The, err, explanation made a surprising amount of sense, too. At least for somepony like Maud, whose lack of emotion gives off a very pragmatic vibe. Could've been a little better (not that I'm an expert), but pretty good, especially for a writer without much experience in this genre. Nice work.

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