Stephens life hasn't been the greatest to say the least, and the last six months have been especially rough. Stephen goes for a drive to think like he always does, but today is different. Somebody makes a mistake, and stephen pays the ultimate price.
Or does he?
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Sounds interesting.
But, I would recommend at least putting a human tag on the story so people know what its about. Tracked
@ canisl thanks for the tip Ill do that!
It's a bit rushed and uses the all well known themes (accident -> death -> wake up in a grassy field near Ponyville) but it isn't half bad, so track.
I hope it'll be as good as it should.
I gotta agree with Zephyr here, yeah sure it's a little rushed but good none the less.
so, I suppose track, I guess.
Thanks for the tips everyone, I'll try slowing it down.
every time someone new speaks you should start a new paragraph, it helps break the wall of text look and is also easier to read
@snowfyre Alright ill try it out for chapter four, im typing it as we speak. erm well type. but anyway, in the case of dialog between two or more people should I start a new one every time?
Ex:
"yada yada yada yada" said twilight.
"blah blah blah blah blah" I responded
sorry for the ignorance. I have never written anything like this.
Okay I think I did better on chapter 4. and I formated chapter 3's dialog better.
looking way better and a lot easier to read, good job and keep up the good work
Thanks snow, I appreciate it. Im learning a lot, so its only going to get better from here hopefully.
Just look for the possible grammar errors and it'll be fine!
Nice progression btw, anything could happen!
yeah thats my only weakness, I suck at proofreading. haha but i have no one to help D:
just means I have improve my own skills
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yes, you should do that.
story looks to be going pretty well now, and as Snowfyre said it's easier to read.
have a stache.
Brotify want MOAR!
Im typing up the next chapters and will have them posted soon! sorry they are taking a little while. Im a senior in high school and i graduate in two weeks D:
Hey guys sorry I havnt updated. Ive got finals in a week and im graduating after that, So im super busy and stressed.
Im going to type up the next chapter tomorrow. Maybe 2 chapters. Depends on how much time I have.
Okie Dokie Lokie!
Also, First!
Im actually in the process of Typing up chapter 6 right now, should have it up in about an hour. maybe less.
Im just so suprised people actually like this.
I didnt think anyone would even pay it any attention.
thanks everyone.
Nopony can ever truly understand pinkie, except for Pinkie herself, she is just that random. So don't think that she might not be captured as well as you hope, she's Pinkie Pie, nopony can truly capture the randomness that she represents.
im amused take this
Please update this!
only becasue you asked mlg gamer. give me a few days do get back into the swing of writing and another few days to polish it.
I like it. Keep up the good work.