"Apple Bloom...wake up, sugarcube..."
"Mmmnnn...five more minutes..."
Applejack sighed, pulling her hat down over her head. "Dang it all...Winona, give 'er a Nuzzle."
"Joooool!" Winona, Applejack's faithful Jolteon, leapt onto the sleeping girl's bed and rubbed against her. Apple Bloom's pinkish-red hair exploded out in every direction.
"YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!" Apple Bloom jumped straight out of bed, twitching madly. "Ah'm up! Ah'm up!"
"Jol jol," Winona said, leaping off the bed and landing beside Applejack.
Apple Bloom ran her hands through her static-maimed hair. "Dagnabbit, AJ! Every dang time!"
Applejack laughed. "That's whutcha git fer bein' lazy, li'l sis." She reached out and mussed Apple Bloom's hair back into something resembling its usual style. "C'mon now, git cleaned up an' dressed. You gotta eat breakfast mighty quick, 'cuz you gotta get over to Miss Cheerilee's place."
Apple Bloom gasped. "Oh mah gosh! Today's th' day!" She rushed out of the room, shedding her pajamas and underwear on her way to the door. Her panties landed on Applejack's head, who stared after her, blinking repeatedly.
"That girl," Applejack said, shaking her head and dislodging the underwear.
"Jol," Winona agreed.
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Apple Bloom studied her reflection in the mirror as she adjusted her big pink hair bow. She wore a red shirt with a greenish-gold scarf, blue jeans, a braided brown leather belt with a hip pack, and black high-tops with yellow laces.
She headed downstairs to find a huge breakfast waiting for her. "Eat up, sis! Time's a-wastin'!" Applejack said.
Apple Bloom sat at the table, looking around at her family: Big Macintosh, her strong, silent big brother, whose sleepy eyes and messy orange hair belied a deep intelligence and compassion. Granny Smith, her slightly senile grandmother and one of the best bakers and jam-makers in the world. Applejack, her big sister who'd raised her since their parents had passed away. Sometimes, Applejack was the bane of her existence. Other times, she was the safety blanket Apple Bloom clung to when the world made her want to cry. She couldn't remember her own mother's face, but Applejack had always been there.
And now, she was about to leave home for a long time...
"You okay, sis?" Applejack asked.
Apple Bloom sniffled. "Yeah. Jes'...a little nervous, Ah guess."
Applejack chuckled. "Yeah, Ah reckon y'are." She sipped her apple juice. "Mah li'l sis...goin' off on her Pokémon journey..." She smiled. "Trust me, Apple Bloom. Yer gonna have th' time of yer life. It'll be fun, an' it'll be scary, an' it'll change yer life..." Her eyes misted over. "You'll find out who you really are...make friends that'll be with you th' rest of yer life..." She brightened up. "That reminds me! Miss Cheerilee said there'll be two other girls waitin' for you at her place! They're startin' out today too!"
"See? You're already gonna have friends, yung'un!" Granny Smith said.
Applejack scratched Winona's head and fed her a bite of bacon. "Ah can't wait t' see how much you grow when you come back to Ponyville..." She grinned. "You better catch lots'a strong Pokémon, 'cuz you know beatin' me t' get yer Apple Badge ain't gonna be easy."
Apple Bloom laughed weakly. "Ah don't think Ah'll ever be good enough t' beat you," she said.
"Actually, you'll have an unfair advantage," Big Macintosh said. "You know about AJ's secret weapon. Most trainers that come here lookin' fer her badge don't count on a Grass-type gym havin'..."
Winona let out a piercing howl.
"Heheh, yep...Ah'll hafta come up with some other way t' trip you up," Applejack said.
"Do all gym leaders have a trick Pokémon up their sleeves?" Apple Bloom asked curiously.
Applejack shrugged. "Can't say, sugarcube. Word of advice, though...be ready for anything. Oh, hey! Ah got some stuff t' give ya 'fore ya take off."
After breakfast, Applejack ran upstairs while Apple Bloom headed into the living room, leaving Big Macintosh and Granny Smith to wash the dishes. She looked out the living room window at the dozens of Grass-type and Ground-type Pokémon which roamed the sprawling grounds of Sweet Apple Acres. The Pokémon made the job of tending and harvesting the apples and various other crops much easier, which was handy because most of the time, the only member of the Apple family available to work on the farm was Big Macintosh...
"Here ya go, sis!" Applejack rushed back into the room carrying a suede backpack. It was stained and looked like it had seen better days, but appeared sturdy. "Mah lucky pack...Ah carried this all over Caballos when Ah was out on mah own Pokémon journey."
Apple Bloom took the pack; it was heavy. She hefted it onto her own back, adjusting the straps. "Thanks..."
"Ah know it don't look like much, but it'll hold durn near anything you need. An' Ah already put a buncha medicine an' Pokémon treats an' snacks fer you an' your new friends an' stuff in it. An' here's somethin' else..." Applejack handed Apple Bloom a shiny red-and-white belt buckle. She turned it over in her hands; it was the symbol of Sweet Apple Acres, a shiny apple that was red on top and white on the bottom, with a black line and a white button bisecting it in the middle, resembling a Pokéball.
"Wow, thanks, sis!" Apple Bloom replaced her own belt buckle with the new one.
"Ah got one more thing," Applejack said. She presented Apple Bloom with a shiny chrome Pokéball holder to clip to her belt. "Every Pokémon trainer needs one'a these!"
"Oh wow," Apple Bloom said. "It's just like yours!" She attached the holder to her belt, adjusting it so it was within easy reach.
"An' of course, you need some Pokéballs," Applejack said. "Ah can only spare a few, you'll hafta get some more later, but these are mah special Apple Balls." She handed Apple Bloom a tray of ten apple-shaped Pokéballs. "There's some Pokémon that'll be easier t' catch with these here," Applejack said.
"Thanks," Apple Bloom said, putting the Apple Balls in her backpack.
"Now, you'd best get on over to Miss Cheerilee's," Applejack said. Her eyes were wet.
"Okay."
* * * * *
Apple Bloom stood at the entrance to Sweet Apple Acres, looking at her family. Big Macintosh was smiling, Granny Smith looked sad, and Applejack's eyes were wetter than ever.
"Take care, li'l sis," Applejack said, sniffling.
"Be good now, yung'un," Granny Smith said.
"Call us whenever you can," Applejack said.
"Eeyup," Big Macintosh said.
Apple Bloom rushed forward and threw her arms around Applejack's stomach, tears streaming from her eyes. "Ah...Ah'll miss you," she said.
Applejack hugged her. "Now now...yer a big girl now...you don't need me no more..."
"Ah'll always need you," Apple Bloom said. She stepped back, sniffling as she looked up at Applejack. "Ah love you." She looked at Big Macintosh and Granny Smith. "Ah love mah family. Ah...Ah'll miss you all."
"We'll miss you too," Granny Smith said, tears filling her eyes.
"Eeyup."
Apple Bloom wiped her eyes and her nose. "Well...Ah'm off..."
With one last look up at the farm's brightly-painted sign, she turned and walked down the dusty road into Ponyville. After walking for almost ten minutes, she reached the edge of the small town, and the landmark that drew most of its out-of-town visitors: a large, barn-like building surrounded by bales of hay. Out front, a large wooden sign in the shape of an apple proudly proclaimed:
PONYVILLE GYM
Leader: Applejack
The Honest Farmer
Across the old weathered road from the gym stood the shining Pokémon Center, with its bright red roof and glass sliding doors.
She continued on into Ponyville proper. It was a quiet town; people she saw nearly every day were going about their business. There were people she didn't recognize as well, of course; some were from out of town, while others, she simply didn't know.
A block from Miss Cheerilee's house, she ran into two people she wished she didn't know.
"Well well, if it isn't the little hayseed."
The girl who had spoken had long, wavy soft lavender hair with white streaks and wore a short pink dress with matching platform shoes, black tights, and a wide black leather belt. A tiny little tiara was perched on her head, and an expensive leather handbag hung from a slim strap at her right hip. Next to her was a taller girl who wore dark grey slacks, a white silk blouse, and light blue high-tops that matched her overly large glasses. Her long silver hair hung down her back in a tight braid, tied off at the end with a fuschia ribbon. A silver brooch shaped like a spoon was pinned to her blouse, a pearl choker graced her throat, and she carried the exact same bag as her friend.
Apple Bloom groaned. "Ah ain't got time for you two today," she said.
"Really? Did you hear that, Silver Spoon? The little hayseed says she doesn't have time for us today."
"I so totally heard that, Diamond Tiara! Like, what do you think could possibly be so important?"
"For your information, Ah'm headed t' Miss Cheerilee's t' get mah very first Pokémon!" Apple Bloom said hotly.
Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon looked at one another and giggled.
"Your f-first Pokémon!"
"O-M-G, she has to go to the teacher for a Pokémon!"
Diamond Tiara snickered. "It's really too bad you can't afford to buy a good Pokémon," she said. "Our daddies just got us the bestest, most amazing Pokémon!" She reached into her handbag and pulled out a gold-plated Pokéball. Silver Spoon pulled a silver Pokéball from her own bag.
"Pokémon, GO!" they said in unison.
In twin beams of red light, two Pokémon appeared in front of Apple Bloom. The Pokémon which stood before Silver Spoon was an Espeon, while Diamond Tiara's was a Victini.
"Aren't they just amazing?" Diamond Tiara asked. "So much better than the common Pokémon all the little kids with poor families get stuck with..."
"Yeah, good luck winning a single battle without Pokémon as amazing as ours," Silver Spoon said haughtily. The two girls laughed, performed a silly secret handshake, then recalled their Pokémon.
"See you around, hayseed!" Diamond Tiara said. The two girls jumped on their expensive bicycles and sped off, laughing. Apple Bloom sighed and continued on her way to Miss Cheerilee's house.
Cheerilee lived in a cheerful little red brick house with a low sandstone fence and a wrought iron gate. Her garden was full of bright, sunny flowers. The gate was open; Apple Bloom walked up the flagstone path to the front door and rang the bell.
After a moment, Miss Cheerilee appeared. She wore a mulberry sweater and dark maroon skirt, and her light pink hair lay in pools of curls around her shoulders. She smiled brightly. "Good morning, Apple Bloom! I was beginning to think you weren't going to make it!"
"Sorry Ah'm late, Miss Cheerilee!"
"Come on in, the others are waiting."
Apple Bloom followed Miss Cheerilee into the living room, where two girls she didn't recognize sat. One of the girls had a deep tan, greyish-purple eyes, and short, messy fuschia hair. She wore an orange vest over a sky blue T-shirt with an emblem on the front of a cloud and a three-colored lightning bolt, as well as khaki shorts, white socks, and brown hiking shoes. An orange knapsack lay beside her on the couch.
The other girl, who sat in one of Miss Cheerilee's easy chairs, had pale skin, light green eyes, and curly hair that was mostly a light rose pink, but had swirly stripes of dusty lavender. She wore a knee-length off-white dress with dark purple trim at the collar, cuffs, and hem, a gold chain link belt, and pink slippers with little lavender bows on them. A royal blue suitcase on wheels stood beside her.
"Well, now that you're all here," Miss Cheerilee said, "first of all, let's all introduce ourselves!"
"Ah'm Apple Bloom!" Apple Bloom said.
The short-haired girl raised a hand in greeting. "Name's Scootaloo," she said.
The pale girl looked up. "I'm Sweetie Belle," she said.
"Wonderful!" Miss Cheerilee said, clapping her hands together. "Now, let's move on to why we're all here. As you may know, ever since Professor Golden Oak retired a few years ago, it's been my job to provide new Pokémon trainers with their first Pokémon." She frowned and muttered, "We really need a new Pokémon professor here in Ponyville..." Her bright smile returned. "I have three Pokémon for three trainers, so I'll let each of you decide which one best suits you." She walked into a side room and returned with a tray containing three Pokéballs. "First up, we have..." She picked up one of the Pokéballs and held it out. In a red flash, an Oshawott appeared.
"Oshaaaaa!" it said, waddling in place as it looked around at them.
"Awww, it's so cute!" Sweetie Belle cooed.
"That's a water-type, right?" Apple Bloom asked. "I'm not very good with water-types."
Sweetie Belle got up out of her chair and knelt down, holding out a hand to the Oshawott. It waddled over to her, leaning in and examining her. "Osha. Wott?"
"Would you like to be my Pokémon?" Sweetie Belle asked.
"Osha!" Oshawott said, smiling cutely.
"Go for it," Scootaloo said.
"Yeah, it seems t' like you," Apple Bloom said.
Miss Cheerilee smiled and handed Sweetie Belle Oshawott's Pokéball. "Alright then, Oshawott is now your Pokémon."
"Yay!" Sweetie Belle squeaked, accepting the Pokéball. "Let's be good friends, Oshawott!"
"Okay, next up..." Miss Cheerilee picked up the second Pokéball from the tray. In a red flash, a Chikorita appeared.
"Oooh, we've raised a ton of those out at the farm!" Apple Bloom said.
"This one actually came from your family's farm," Miss Cheerilee said.
"Chiiiikariii!" Chikorita said enthusiastically.
"This might be a good Pokémon for you, Apple Bloom. You should be a natural with Grass-types, right?"
"Yeah, Ah guess so. That okay with you, Scootaloo?"
"It's cool with me," Scootaloo said.
"Okay then," Apple Bloom said. "Chikorita, looks like you're comin' back t' th' Apple family!"
"Ri rii!" It leapt up and batted its Pokéball from Miss Cheerilee's hand to Apple Bloom, who caught it easily, laughing.
"My, it's so energetic!" Miss Cheerilee said, rubbing her hand. "Okay then, that just leaves this one for Scootaloo. Are you ready to meet your Pokémon?"
"Yeah, I'm ready," Scootaloo said.
"Okay...say hello to Torchic!" Miss Cheerilee held out the final Pokéball, and a Torchic appeared.
"Toooorchic!" it cried.
"Oh cool, a Fire-type!" Scootaloo said, suddenly excited. "Now that's what I'm talkin' about!"
Miss Cheerilee handed Scootaloo Torchic's Pokéball, then stepped back. "Now, girls...I want the three of you to start out on your Pokémon journey together. I know you just met, but I'm sure in no time at all, you'll be good friends! But before you head out, I think I should teach you some of the basics. If you'll follow me out into the back yard..."
The three girls recalled their new Pokémon, then followed Miss Cheerilee through the house and into the back yard.
Once they arrived, she stood a distance from the girls and faced them. "Send out your Pokémon, girls," she said. The girls did as instructed. "Now, the best way to teach you about using your Pokémon is...a battle!" Three Pokéballs appeared between Miss Cheerilee's fingers. She tossed them out; they expanded and released three Pokémon: an Emolga, a Buizel, and a Geodude.
"Get ready, girls!" Miss Cheerilee said. "This is your first step on your Pokémon journey!"
WHY THE HELL DOES DIAMOND TIARA HAVE A VICTINI!?!?!
THAT'S A LEGENDARY!! SHOULDN'T SHE HAVE A NON-LEGENDARY POKEMON WITH HER!?!?!?!
Wow. A triple battle first thing? I like this region.
Also, a fricking VICTINI!? Who thought it was a good idea to give Diamond Tiara a nuke!?
Ahem. Sorry about that. In any case, definitely looking forward to more.
5451820 Money.
While overall pretty good...
I lost all suspension of disbelief when Filthy Rich was able to buy Diamond Tiara a Victini, the Legendary Victory Pokémon. No way anyone who could catch Victini would sell it, and no way Diamond Tiara would be able to get Victini to stay with her.
Sorry, but a rival character starting with a Legendary just isn't believable. That needs to get changed.
5451830 right.....totally forgot about that.
Another question: why have 3 random starters? Wouldn't it make more sense to have 3 starters from the same region? (If I'm sounding rude I'm terribly sorry)
Why do I already think Filthy Rich wasted his money on that Victini?
5451843 I wanted to mix it up.
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5451828 OK, putting a halt to this right now:
Did it occur to anyone that maybe Victini isn't a Legendary Pokemon in the Caballos region? Or that perhaps a collector DOES sell such extremely rare Pokemon for the right price? (Which there is precedent for, see also Pokemon Hunter J?)
5451870 It was a nice mix-up I'll admit.
I'm upvoting just because of the specialty Pokéballs. I have an inexplicable affinity for that sort of thing.
This is going to be quite the tutorial battle... Emolga's going to be the main challenge, I'm sure.
Good
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"Regional legendarity" doesn't really make sense, not in the age of global connectivity. Why would something be so rare as to be the subject of myth in one area and available in pet stores* in another? Yes, exotic pets are a thing, but no one doubts that Siberian tigers and boa constrictors exist. Also, some exotic pets are of rather dubious legality, as evinced by your own example. Doesn't seem like the kind of image Filthy Rich would want to cultivate.
All that being said, it's not Diamond Tiara having a legend that bothers me so much as her having that legend. I know Pokédexes (Pokédices?) always exaggerate, but a being of infinite energy seems like the last thing someone should put in a spoiled child's hands.
*Deliberately exaggerating the availability here.
5451960 Dude. It's a fanfic. I'm taking one liberty because I wanted to give Diamond Tiara a particularly unusual Pokemon. Chillax.
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At least she wasn't given a broken as hell Volcarona... At least this particular "legendary" is starting out at a reasonable level. Between the two, Volcarona curb stomps Victini in all the stats that matter (ignoring any bug-type moves it could learn), even with a negative trait hindering its growth. God only knows how powerful it would become if a level 1-5 Volcarona was given to that spoiled little twit...
You think the threat of electric shock would make her more likely to wake up!
I've always wondered how they get meat in the Pokémon world...
Grass types?
OH DEAR GOD THE SPOILED TEN YEAR OLD HAS A LIVING NUCLEAR BOMB WE'RE ALL GONA DIIIEEEE!(Not saying this is a bad choice, mind; it's just a choice that terrifies me immensely)
What you did there, I see it.
I've said it before, and I'll say it again; I am fairly certain this joke is mandated by federal law.
FIRE-TYPE IS LOVE, FIRE-TYPE IS LIFE!!
Well, a wonderful start, and can't wait until you feel like writing more!
Your face is also good, Im a Soos as well! Weird huh? Also, you stole my idea! I prolly shoulda mentioned it, but this is basically what I was gonna do. Guess I gotta settle for Dashie Potter...
5451960 She probably asked for Victini because of its "always wins battles" property, which doesn't always hold true for obvious reasons. I'm banking on DT being a crap Trainer (and I wanna see her ass torched in classic Team Rocket fashion ), but I will not be disappointed at all if Moth subverts my expectations on that.
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There are worse things she could have... Like the living apocalypse that is an angered Vocarona...
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Reciting the MST3K Mantra as we speak. Sorry. Sometimes I forget that not every story needs to have every possible ramification analyzed.
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Eh, having starters from multiple regions available is canon as of X and Y. A trainer who had started in Lumiose City instead of Vaniville Town might have started with a Kanto starter.
There's also precedent for trainers capturing legendaries in pokeballs. The player of each game manages it obviously. Emerald's Battle Frontier is chock full of legendary-using trainers: Dome Ace Tucker uses a Latias in the Battle Dome, Palace Maven Spenser uses a Suicune in the Battle Palace, Salon Maiden Anabel uses an Entei, a Raiku, and a Latios, and Pyramid King Brandon uses all three legendary golems and all three legendary birds. Greevil uses a Lugia in Pokemon XD, though he made it a shadow pokemon first. Blue had an Arcanine in Red and Green, back when that pokemon was considered legendary. The games, anime, and films feature a bunch of trainers who use or own or claim to own or pursue legendaries, mostly antagonists who don't use pokeballs for some reason. The anime also features people who interact with legendaries but who don't try to capture them. That episode with the baby lugia comes to mind (I like lugia, can you tell?).
I'm not usually a fan of Pokemon crossovers, but what the heck, I'll give this one a shot.
Interesting start, and I now hate your Diamond Tiara. She makes Gary "Motherfing" Oak sound like a pretty nice guy!
Still beating that dead horse, aren't you ?
Scootaloo and the chicken. They're gonna go far in this.
I look forward to the battle with Cpt. Spitfire.
5451820 Why? Because "Screw the rules, I have money." That's why.
Diamond Tiara with an event legendary? Damn, Filthy Rich must have went through Hell and back to get that thing.
I can see Twilight being a psychic trainer. Or the new pokemon professor. Or both, actually. Oooo... a psychic and and dragon tamer professor! Why? Because she can.
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"yeah? Well, I got a liberty pass and found myself a really amazing Pokemon. Just the Pokemon worthy of my skills. Wanna see? I guarantee you'll be totally jealous. After all, it only chooses the very best to be its trainer."
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Obligatory Team Rocket cameo.
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I'd totally be down for a Pokemon Harmony & Chaos Pokemon game. Where all the pokepony modders at? XD
I quit pokemon until I was finally able to acquire a legit Victini GameSpot edition pokemon. I love that little winged-butt pokemon <3
5452830 She totally made him buy her that exclusive liberty pass. xD
Did you chose Cheerilee's pokemon to be effective to the CMC's starters, or did you just choose some random pokemon and they happened to be effective to them? Also, I'm calling that at least one gym will have a Ponyta/Rapidash. Calling it. Love the fic, can't wait for the next one.
i was hoping apple bloom gets a charmander instead
And so it all begins! Also... DT gets a Victini? Well, it'll make it all the more satisfying when Apple Bloom eventually takes it out with a Meganium. Against typing, versus a legendary.
5451838 Check the GTS in the game. More people are willing to part with their legendaries then you think.
5451843 My guess is that it isn't based off of one region in particular. Totally new region means totally new starter set.
5451960 Let's keep in mind that this fic probably isn't even going to try and coexist with other pokemon regions or always follow 'canon'. There could be many Victini out there.
5452052 There's no reason two authors can use the same springboard. That being said, if you want to use the same insperation, you might want to avoid reading this until you get your own story structure written out.
5452066 Initially, that's how I figure it will go. Once DT and SS get that Strong Pokemon does not equal Good Trainer, they might get somewhere. It would be kind of boring to see them always getting curb stomped.
Overall, it's a good start. I didn't even realize this was a human fic until I saw the tags after reading. You earned that upvote. Keep up the good work!
This would be easier to follow if I hadn't stopped playing Pokemon years ago, and before that only played the German language versions.
normally i don´t like such storys, but it already sounds weird enough to get me interested. I think i start to read later, after i got a break from reading for a moment.
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The trick is having the right thing to trade for them, and being on the GTS at the right time. The real trick is getting the event legendaries. VERY rare for them to go for anything less than an event legendary or something REALLY pain-in-the-ass to get.
This exactly. Frankly, I've never cared for the notion that Victini is a legendary. It LOOKS like a damn starter.
5453725 Eh, it won't be that hard to follow, so long as you use Bulbapedia or Serebii.net as a Pokedex as you go.
I just finished reading the 1st chapter & already I'm totally Psyched for more. Keep up the Awesome work with this story. ;)
this is a great story keep it up!
I am so going to read this! Why do I get the feeling that Scootaloo will be a mixture of Brock and her mentally advanced version? Joking, of course.
5451830 ...I get the feeling a Pokemon like Victini wouldn't listen to Diamond just because "money." I think a heavily groomed Furfrou (probably La Reine or Debutante trim) would be a better status-symbol Pokemon, because I don't think a legendary is going to behave for a pompous twat who abuses everyone below her. And you KNOW she'll think her Pokemon are below her.
That, or maybe find some way to work Victini's rebellion into the story somewhere down the line. The thought that it could be working with her happily doesn't make sense to me or sit well with me.
5452113 Great points! And need I remind everyone of one person in the DP saga of the anime: Tobias! This fker somehow managed to enter a tournament with a Darkrai that he swept the entire Gym Challenge with, as well as a Latios for backup on the very off chance Darkrai was KOd. One of the biggest ass pulls in Pokémon history, as far as I'm concerned, only there to have Ash lose to someone while he had his most badass team ever, spurring him to go to Unova.
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WHY THE DOES DIAMOND TIARA HAVE A VICTINI!?!?!
THAT'S A LEGENDARY!! SHOULDN'T SHE HAVE A NON-LEGENDARY POKEMON WITH HER!?!?!?!
IKR??? Her father is a *squee*
You gave Silver Spoon an Espeon, ok, i'm... fine with that.
but...
You gave Diamond Tiara a FUCKING VICTINI
Isn't that, like, the FUCKING EMBODYMENT OF VICTORY?
BLACK: This Pokémon brings victory. It is said that Trainers with Victini always win, regardless of the type of encounter.
WHITE: It creates an unlimited supply of energy inside its body, which it shares with those who touch it.
BLACK 2/WHITE 2: When it shares the infinite energy it creates, that being's entire body will be overflowing with power.
There is no way Applebloom can beat her. At lest not without another Legendary. Do you hate her or something
Mommy, what are fingers?
As for the rest of the story, I can't wait to read more of this. I've been waiting for a while now for a decent Pokémon story to come up sooner or later.
5455769 or a dark type Victini's useful but not as much as the pokedex would have you believe
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You... Do know that you can't trade event Pokémon over the global trading system in generation VI, right?
5455769 Yes it may be true that Victini is the "Victory Pokemon", but that makes it all the more hilarious when Apple Bloom mops the floor with Diamond Tiara and completely humiliates her in front of everyone.
I don´t really know what i should expect from the world in this fanfiction, but well even if i never thought of Victinini as the strongest of the legendary Pokemon, he was still somehow.......well let´s just say i never thought Silverspoon (she was it right?), would be able to find a Victini and bought it.
I thought they would have a fitting team, and it woul be probably some of those Pokemon like.......Milotic or Espeon and Umbreon.
5457597 your right, that would be funny a Victinini, that is destined to loose, i mean training is for poor people right? (i totally expect them not to train very much.
Soooo i think i like the story, i think i had choosed Chikorita too. I had choosed Torchic the first time too, and Otaroo is very nice, but Chikorita is pretty cute and not that bad. But i think my favourite starters are Cyndaquil, Snivy (but i guess it is not the strongest), and probably Glurak, but i always try not to choose the same pokemon i had once.
I will be honest. It felt like my head exploded when I read Victini. This will be a personal annoyance, but I will manedge. *Sigh* As for the choice of Grass-type starter? You have my 100% aproval.
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Here here!
It took me a second to get the joke with Torchic and Scootaloo. XD
I know that Besr Pony is Best Pony, but Victini? Really?
If I were Tiara, I would probably say something like:
"Ugh, I don't care about how strong it is, I care about how cool it is! Now how about this Liepard? It's cool..."