Chrysalis attempts to break up with her special somepony. That's pretty much it, really.
I just found this in my Google Drive. I'm not sure what it is or why I would write such ridiculousness. I only vaguely remember writing it.
Some people are morning birds, other people are night owls. Me? I'm some sort of permanently exhausted pigeon.
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I've gotta admit, I clicked this because I saw the character tags and I was curious as to whether there was a cheese grater involved.
The idea of Sombra having a twin brother is cute, and it sets up a nice reaction from Chrysalis on learning of his death. I got a good smile out of that one. Sombra's memory seems to be driven by the demands of the plot, which is less good, but there's definitely some imagination on display here.
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Yeah, I'll admit that that's one of my bad habits as a writer. To make the plot work, I'll manipulate the characters, even write them OOC, and invent plot devices. Sweetie Belle needs to run away? No problem, just make her really sensitive. Spike needs to not be chasing after her? No problem, he trips and falls into a deep hole in the ground, which just happens to be filled with gems.
Pleas kill us again with such hillarity!
Absolutely hilarious! Great story.
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Not your greatest story, but a solid effort considering how young you were at the time.
—Sleepy Panda, 2016
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I've downvoted this story now.
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I'll have to upvote it to compensate.
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How rude.
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I've never been called rude for upvoting a story before.