Why Heaven???

When ponies pass away they are sent to a different realm. A realm where Celestia meets them to confirm if they go to heaven or not. But, unfortunately, one of the citizens in Ponyville was teleported to this realm. What's unfortunate about this event is that he was still alive when teleported there.
Now he wants to get out as quickly as possible. But that's not going to be easy.

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VinnyMartello

VinnyMartello #1 · Dec 22nd, 2014 · · ·

Dark comedy is always fun. I like the basis of the story. I'm guessing Luna's butchered old English is part of the act. However, in my arrogant opinion, I feel that having the whole thing entirely in present tense makes it rather difficult to read. I'm guessing there's a strategy to it? If so, I'm intrigued enough to read the next chapter.

Kobitsu

Kobitsu #2 · Dec 23rd, 2014 · · ·

Nice fic, very well written Only Luna is kind of bothering me

NixWorld

NixWorld #3 · Dec 23rd, 2014 · · ·

5413029 This story is a one-shot. It will not have more chapters to it. I'm sorry that you thought that there was more but for me, this story is 100% complete.
I'm glad you liked it though. Merry Christmas.

VinnyMartello

VinnyMartello #4 · Dec 23rd, 2014 · · ·

5415813 Well shucks. The nutty concept of being stuck in between realities is grounds for an entire story! I guess I'll just have to come up with one myself!

Julia