After a mishap with a senile, half-blind janitor mistaking her clothes for a wad of towels, Sunset Shimmer has to find a way to get home without being seen. Unfortunately, her plans don't exactly work out the way she'd hoped...
I've seen a lot of these types of fics as of late, and I broke down and joined the bandwagon. Honestly, even in the first movie, I've always liked Sunset Shimmer's character, and the second movie just made me like her character more, so I kinda wanted to do a Shimmer Fic anyway. I'm not really intending for this to be edgy, but honestly, some of life's funniest moments can come from a rather awkward situation... Hopefully I can make you laugh at least once.
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That's the third Streaking Sunset story overall and the second one in which she gets carried to the home of some OC. Not complaining, just taking count. Is this enough to justify creating a group for this trend?
Lol that s Halley is
This is my face
5428286 I believe there is a group already. Do you think I should submit this to said group?
5428803 There is? Hot diggity! Do it, and while you're at it link me to it!
5429150 http://www.fimfiction.net/group/205988/streaking-shimmer There ya go :)
Oh good lord, what have I started.
Hmm. Execution's not especially great, there's a lot of wasted potential with the setup here, and it...ends really abruptly. It feels unfinished.
5433653 Yeah, I hate it too
This is okay but I have to ask, why Sunset couldn't just ask to borrow his larger jacket rather than hide under it?
5471331 Because I wanted to make a story that was like the one that inspired it. Honestly, this is easily the worst story I've written and it clearly shows because I tried too hard to write a story that was like the original but was it's own story as well, and I failed. All I can ask is that you don't base your opinion of my writing off of this fic alone.
Sunset Shimmer is best backpack.
Period.
Well, this is the second story of this sort that I've read. Frankly, this did feel too much like the other one. It's not bad, it's just...more of the same.
That said, they need to retire the old janitor lady. She's past retirement age as is.
This was an okay story, but there's some things you may want to edit. First off, there's three sentences with no ending punctuation.
And lastly, you placed a space in the middle of a word at one point.
this story is almost identical to 'rain at sunset'
although, better written i think
I like this type of story. Completely plutonic niceness that result in aqwared situation not involving... That thing. I kinda whish there was one one more of these out there with no friendly jock but more close calls. Oh well,these story's are cool
Uh oh!
Well looks like she's on her own now.
Well at least it didn't end horribly.