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A brony wakes up to find himself in an unfamiliar forest in an unfamiliar body. Will his knowledge of a cartoon about pastel colored ponies help him keep his cover and his freedom? And even if the ponies don't find him will a certain changeling queen?

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Marked teen for occasional swearing and violence
May add more characters as story progresses

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I like this! New concept to the usual HiE.

Tracked and upvoted!

Why do all of the Changling Hie always attack the Mane 6 go talk to them Applejack can tell if you mean to harm them

I'll admit, I love the human-as-changeling concept.

Not to burst your bubble, but a couple other stories also used the idea of a human turned changeling as the premise of their story.
That won't be bad if you can add an original spin to it.
So far the actual implied feeding is new. I'll keep watching this.

525133 In the ones I've read, they start out hungry, and put priority on eating first over trying to make friends.

525158 well if they make friends then passively they will get food (love) from friends

525163 I feel it'd be a bit hard to form a genuine bond that quickly. Given how changelings go about attacking existing love instead of putting in the time and effort, I assume they need something more substantial than a simple "we get along with each other."

525179 yes but when you tell the human lie detector that "i am not going to hurt you i dont work for Chrysalis" i imagin they would tend to be more comfortable arround you

525220 step one get her attention from a distance step to commence with IM NOT A THREAT

525261 Ah, caution paired with common sense. I tend to forget about those easily. :facehoof:

hope there is more soon! :D:

I want moar of this


Sincerely the Doctor

525261
so we meet again :flutterrage:

im liking this track and like.

525436
:pinkiegasp: im offend that you forgot me offending you!!! :trixieshiftleft:
im the batman.

525490 Yes and Im the Gnome also there are alot of people that know me sorry im guessing you were the person saying that i am everywhere

interesting
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please continue

525516
yes im also superman. :trixieshiftright:

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tracking and hoping you update on a regular basis:ajsmug:

Agreed with above ^

nicely written, but I dont think that a changeling is dangerous to the one providing the affection...

Im going to watch this, Don't let us down! Also, MOAR! :flutterrage:

I love this new concept of HiE were our main character has become a changeling, I believe it makes for a very good story.

525194
I think Changeling are the only creatures that would fool Applejack. Otherwise she would have bucked Chrysalis into kingdom come during Part 1 of the season finale.

Interesting concept. I went with 1/2 Changeling.

528425 but she was queen of the changlings its like a pathalogical liar they are good at it you arenot

528499
Oh, so she's like the queen of liars.

528507 yes and you i would imagine have the lying skill of a 4 year old compared to her so yes AJ would be able to find you out

I demand moar.
ASAP.

Epic i love these human changeling fanfic's and this one seems good

Never know why they always feel guilt, if its that species way to survive then its no ones fault.

Yeah.. changeling is cool for bronies . . at least MLP got ponies that look badass, MOAR PLEASE!!

525027
I remember you! Hows your godlike HiE going? Also if an update isn't up in 72 hours...well...

burning now i bring you hell

MMMMOOOOAAAAARRRRRRRRRRR. That is such a great Idea. Im going to love to see where this goes.

Axz

I dont like HE turned ponies stories, there are some that is good but generally the concept is boring and have become so dull, and on top of that there's so many of them.
Human turned alicorn i think a bit more highly of, why?. Well first of its not dune to death and 2th having the human character be a major power player dose make more interesting if the story is going the action rout.

HiE turned changeling shod force the writer to take a different approach compared to HiE turned pony storys because of the food/love thing, and there for i by default like the genera, some so far have suckd and some have not, and your story so far i think is on the plus side, its not a perfect masterpieces of art but its still dame good.
so ill track this and see where you take it

will this ever be updated?

This is a cool story can't wait for it to be updated :scootangel:

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