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Alcatraz


Come with me, and you'll be, in a world of pony procreation...

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Love it!!!! Well written, very nice.I do hate the most of those dislikes are from the subject matter tho...

This time I actually laughed out loud. I had to be careful not to spit my drink everywhere. “HAH, that’s actually pretty funny. I’ve not had anyone put it like that before.”

Crimson raised a brow, looking at me with a slight expectant look. “So…”

There was a moment of silence before it dawned on me that he could in fact be serious. “Wait, you were serious?”

So beautifully written, and so damn hot! :pinkiehappy:

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Now try to convince the 13 downvoters that they shouldn't downvote because of content and an OC cast, the two reasons why I presume this has a 50/50 downvote ratio

5439296 It really pisses me off when people downvote because of content and not quality. When I see more downvotes than upvotes on a story, it makes me feel like the quality's low, when it's usually not. It makes it a lot harder for people who actually like this stuff to weed out the well written stories from the poorly written stories when searching. :applejackunsure:

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That is a bit of a problem. I recall knightly saying he's going to do something about it. What that something is I don't know.

And it restores a small fraction of my hope for this generation when I see comments like yours, it just means that people still have enough common sense left not to down vote something purely because of content.

I want to fap to the cover art.

What?

Comment posted by The Judge deleted Dec 31st, 2014

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"fetal" is used in North America, whereas "foetal" is still used in Commonwealth regions such as the United Kingdon, New Zealand and so on. It's colloquial spelling, so I'm still correct in how I spelt it. It's like how Americans spell 'color' whereas we British spell 'colour'.

See here: http://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/foetal

5443326 Sorry,my mistake.

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No need to worry about it, and you didn't need to delete your comment either haha

Very hot, I must say! If there is any one piece of regret... it's that they didn't get to turn Scarlett Blade's flanks red as promised :rainbowlaugh:

This is quite clearly a one shot and finished, but a sequel would be very much appreciated. Even if she doesn't remember most of the encounter, it's still possible that the whole experience left a particular longing in her she can't explain.

Agh!
I missed an apostrophe, and a couple of Is that should be mes.

Oh well. It's still pretty much all grammatically correct.

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it's funny because when I came across this fic, I thought that since the ratio wasn't very good, I'd just skip it and look for similar stories in the groups it's in. But then I read the comments, and it looks like I've changed my mind.



You know what would be great? Two separate rating systems per story. One for quality and one for content. That would help clear up a lit of confusion IMO.

Soon, Crimson. Soon. Have fun while you still can.

I liked it. Well written.

You WOULD write another one of those. :3

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And you WOULD read it ;3

5613541 Fair point, I guess. XD
Kinda makes me wish I was good at writing clop. :3

Umm it could of also been called "Scarelet Dominatrix" just saying ^_^

more, can we have a sequel, or something?

6415727 This was intended as a one-shot, but feel free to browse my other stories.

6416182 could you at least consider somesort of other part to this story, or something

6416182 like this happens to twilight, or rarity, or someone else

6419712 I've put plenty of thought into another story like this, but whenever I sit down and actually start writing clop, my writing capabilities fly out the window faster than Rainbow during cider season.

could an octavia melody one be possible? if it would help, i could assist in writing it, if that would be ok

Just one chapter? But a nice one . I like it how she got into it, and i think, without a mind erazer potion, Scarlet would have come back on her own^^

Waiiiiit Scarlett blade?!?! WHY ARE YOU A STORY, YOU WERE THE CHOSEN ONE YOU WERE SOPPOSED TO READ THEM! NOT JOIN THEM
https://m.youtube.com/channel/UC_N6l1TzmmDNiFsp9CyK-5A
Be warned, many ponie things on that page

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