Thanks guys, you're really great! I keep thinking how amateurish this sounds, but I guess it's just me being over-criticizing of my own work! Heh . Details on the release of the next chapter - I plan to write it tonight or tomorrow, depending on whether I can get my computer for the whole of the night like yesterday - which is when I wrote the first chapter. As for the Cutie Mark Crusaders, it will kind of be like consenting molestation, seeing as they're fillies and all. I'm not going to tell you why they're consenting, but it's not technically rape, I'll tell you that much.
Finally, I just wanted to say that I'm doing these because Chrysalis didn't have enough stories - and none that are vanilla as far as I know. Everyone likes sex, no? So just laying it out like my favorite clopfic, 'Drop the (b)Ass' aka '40 oz. Bounce', seemed like a great idea. The only fetish the viewer in that one seemed to have was to asses. But fear not, I shall not limit myself to fulfilling one hole for you fellow bronies - I will make sure every bit gets their piece. I'm the kind of steed who wants to please everyone, if ya know what I mean ~
526129 That's quite fine - it doesn't matter when you read it, just that you read it is all that matters! Once you're done with your fic, I might take a gander at it if you remind me :J
526138 you could take a gander now seeing as im on chapter 19 and the word count is pushing 105,000 but its almost done and i may finish by the time you catch up
526208 don't take to long then friend a sequel is coming out after this one so you wana catch up quick before the protagonist has to wait for you to finish he isn't good at waiting
Dem poor CMCs. They just don't know what I got planned.
eh, why not, I don't read much of these anyway so why not let this one have a go? Keep up the good work.
me gusta mucho
It's great! It's got the essence of a clopfiction and straight to the point I like that
release the next part soon!
Eh, I'll read it. Will give my opinion when I'm done.
Edit: Not bad, not bad at all. I'll be watching this, so do release the next chapter soon good sir.
Looks interesting!
I'm not the kind of guy who takes clopfics seriously, but this ones caught my interest. I'll keep my eye on this...
Hmmm... So, in regards to the CMC, are we talking about straight up rape or is there going to be some sort of mind control or some such involved?
Thanks guys, you're really great! I keep thinking how amateurish this sounds, but I guess it's just me being over-criticizing of my own work! Heh . Details on the release of the next chapter - I plan to write it tonight or tomorrow, depending on whether I can get my computer for the whole of the night like yesterday - which is when I wrote the first chapter. As for the Cutie Mark Crusaders, it will kind of be like consenting molestation, seeing as they're fillies and all. I'm not going to tell you why they're consenting, but it's not technically rape, I'll tell you that much.
Finally, I just wanted to say that I'm doing these because Chrysalis didn't have enough stories - and none that are vanilla as far as I know. Everyone likes sex, no? So just laying it out like my favorite clopfic, 'Drop the (b)Ass' aka '40 oz. Bounce', seemed like a great idea. The only fetish the viewer in that one seemed to have was to asses. But fear not, I shall not limit myself to fulfilling one hole for you fellow bronies - I will make sure every bit gets their piece. I'm the kind of steed who wants to please everyone, if ya know what I mean ~
Color me intrigued. I'll keep an eye out.
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Never fear, for I have been working on the next chapter for this whole day!
I'm actually three paragraphs or so from releasing the rest of it.
526104 you are a saint friend
but you may have to wait for me to read it
its getting late
and i have my own fic to write
anywho
see you around
526129
That's quite fine - it doesn't matter when you read it, just that you read it is all that matters!
Once you're done with your fic, I might take a gander at it if you remind me :J
526138 you could take a gander now
seeing as im on chapter 19
and the word count is pushing 105,000
but its almost done
and i may finish by the time you catch up
526183
Aye, as soon as this is finished, then.
526208 don't take to long then friend
a sequel is coming out after this one
so you wana catch up quick before the protagonist has to wait for you to finish
he isn't good at waiting
628045
Thought of what? Was there an image there?
We're all going to pony-hell...Might as well enjoy the ride.*clicks next chapter*
628045 damn it you beat me to the punch great when i read that i thought what you commented
628045 oh god that's hilarious hahahahaha
You you you you you you you...
you sure this reads interesting? :/
Your MC? Sorry but i hate the weak.