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Hello to you, my name is Sosai! Read the blog! It'll do you all some good.


Part of my 15 Slices series. A short one-shot in which Applejack gives Twilight Sparkle a lesson in how to properly buck apples. Slight TwiJack.

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Comments ( 10 )

A TwiJack story? Wow those are rare, tracking.


Cute and well written, I like it :pinkiehappy:

I agree with this being a cute story.
Also I did not notice any grammar/spelling errors so either they are not there or are just very minor.

1 thing you could do is making it a bit less of a wall of text.
For example some empty lines after a few lines

Also a suggestion.

Since you say this is part of a series called 15 slices you could call the story 15 slices and name the chapters the way you named this story.


The more I look at it, the more I get it. I need to think more FF.net and less book editig when I publish here. I've been writing and printing novels recently which requires a different level of formatting. The indents probably won't go away, though.

Every pony else: thanks!

This is a cute story. :twilightsmile::ajsmug:

This is gunna get continued right? RIGHT??? :raritydespair:

Not everyday I get to indulge in some Twijack shipping (Apple sparkle? Magic Apples? w/e) dood, hope you continue your crusade in this story, dood.:pinkiehappy:


This one is just a one-shot, but seeing as how Twijack is my B.B.F.F.'s fav pairing, this won't be the last you see of them together.

Good reading,

erm.....wheres the love if its a twijack story?

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