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Silver Centurion


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Twilight has always been curious of other worlds. She has spent entire nights just staring up at the stars through her telescope. But recently, she has become more and more obsessed with other worlds until finally it comes to a head. Twilight assembles many of her unicorn friends and attempts to perform a spell performed only once before by Celestia herself when she banished Luna to the moon. But now, Twilight Sparkle and her friends attempt to perform it on a much larger scale. But things don't always go as planned, and now Twilight is separated from the majority of her friends in a strange new world where evil runs rampant. But she'll soon discover that one hyperactive yordle is different than the rest as she and Shining Armor are taken in,cared for, and taught to survive in the dog-eat-dog world of Runeterra.

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Comments ( 21 )

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(TO ZIGGS LOVE TEEMO)

*sigh* LoL's story is just so painfully bad, I can't bring myself to read this. Especially with Ziggs this should be a comedy!

Holy shit a LoL/MLP cross-over? Count me in.

Don't worry, i have a different take on this, just give it a try it's different to say the least.

See's Ziggs
Reads Immediately :pinkiecrazy:

I smell Veigar on sunday wohoo.
Veigar is going to e w q r everyone. (Don't forget deathfire grasp)

Also Ziggs,Veigar,and Heimerdinger best casters all time.

My name is John Conner and I'm Here to give you a thumps up

ALL MY WANT :pinkiehappy: (include a spin2win cameo and my life will be made) :trollestia::yay::twilightsmile:

I know it's tagged tragedy and sad but could you throw in a bit more humor? I mean that's one of Ziggs' big appeals is the crazy yordle bomber.

Comment posted by Silver Centurion deleted Nov 6th, 2013

531381 what other champions will be in this story ;D

Comment posted by Silver Centurion deleted Nov 17th, 2013

You seem like you need a prereader. I've been looking for a story to be a prereader for, and am a fan of LoL. Work out for you?

cant wait to see the match ;D

Sweet, sweet, character development with an added dose of Ziggs' patented mannerisms. I did notice quite a few spelling mistakes so if you're in need of an editor I could always lend a hand. Here's what I've managed to fix for this chapter:

She began to readjust the covers and tuck them as best as she could; it was the least she could do.

For now, it was about time she did some observing.

Twilight was taken aback by the kindness of this creature, just the night before they had been intruders in his home, and now, he had made them breakfast, gave them a place to stay, and had also given Twilight the rare opportunity to observe this strange new world from his perspective.

It was furnished with a bookshelf, a coffee table, a shag rug, and a couch which was set up so that it mimicked a bed on stilts.

"What’d (or What did) he make?"

"I don’t know. How about we go find out." (Twilight is a bookworm so shorthand words wouldn’t be something she would regularly use)

Switching her gaze from the fruit to the large platter, she spied one of her personal favorites. Pancakes! (Having her favorite food would probably warrant some excitement)

Twilight asked, still a little starstruck as the yordle walked over to her and her brother, placing a full cup of orange juice besides each of their overflowing plates.

So that was a little bit of a challenge, but from what you see before you, it turned out pretty well." replied the yordle as he pulled up his own chair, ready to dig into his own plate of food.

"Besides, I’m not gonna make you eat any, that is of course if you don't want any."

She continued to absentmindedly take large spoonfuls of food as she continued to search for an explanation to why a creature would do such a thing.
Yeah that's it, she figured as she continued on with the conversation.

"Hmmm.... well after breakfast I'm going to be in my lab for a while, your welcome to come and observe if you like." the yordle replied, taking a bite of his sausage, which oozed out grease as he set it back on his plate.

"Well, anyways, like I said, you're welcome to come and watch me today, but don't touch anything. You'll find that a lot of the stuff I produce isn't the safest to handle..."

“You shoulda seen the look on your faces when I said that. Nah, you guys just have to help out with the chores around the house, aww man, gimme a second."

"Hold on just a sec, lemme get my gear on." the yordle spoke as he put on a light green lab-coat, which he had found on a small table beside a metal door that seemed to split into four sections.

The left side had a larger rim than the left and had less room for the red lense that occupied the center of each goggle. (Sentence is hard to understand, clean it up a bit. Especially the whole left side had a larger rim than the left)

Truth be told, he was scared too. He knew who the figure at the door was, he knew that he was back for revenge.

Believe me, once you've seen what he can do, anything is better than what he’ll do to you."

"I know you're here. Leave them alone, this is between us and us only, don't drag’em into this too."

And if so why did she fly off the deep-end and start verbally assaulting her caretaker.

But then that begs the question, what could've made her so angry that it made her feel true hatred.

"Oh, yea that's right I forgot to tell you, there's big match tomorrow at the Institute of War, I'm joining the League of Legends."

Ziggs said as he pulled a small black remote out of nowhere

I'm sorry to point out a problem in your story I like it but it is critical
Talon is not loyal to Noxus, He is only loyal to the General Du Couteau
Moreover he is honorable So why will he torment Ziggis :facehoof:
It is a good story thought beside that plot hole

Max

tracking, you got my attention and this story looks really good!

I wonder how the mane 6 and the princess's will react to Ziggs "explosive":twilightoops: personality if he follows Twi and her brother to Equestria:rainbowhuh:

Now I don't play LoL, but I do do research on the champions, and shouldn't Ziggs be a little more demented, or are you saving that for when he's in a fight?

Goodluck Ziggs...it's not like Talon can burst you down after he lands cutthroat on you :P

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