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Daxn


Vidi Terram Novam, Vidi Caelum Novum. Terram, Terram Novam in Hanc Vitam! Mazda descedentem et absterget omnia dolori lacrimas!

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This story is a sequel to Ab Initio-From the Start-Al Principio.


Days upon days upon days have passed, since the end of Twilight’s unusual punishment for her lack of control in coping with her delay in sending a letter about what she had learned to Princess Celestia

A punishment that has caused Twilight to fight and prevail against her mother, gone crazy in her wish for get her “old Twily” back and against Princess Celestia, whose desires of returning Twilight to an unwanted fillyhood have taken a very dark turn and almost destroyed a colt's innocence.

However, Princess Celestia is way more determined and patient than what it seems...

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Well, I'm glad to see that Twilight managed to give Celestia what she wanted, without giving into the princesses desires. :eeyup:

Now, how is Twilight going to deal with the business her mother is running in Ponyville with the help of Pinkie Pie?

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Now, how is Twilight going to deal with the business her mother is running in Ponyville with the help of Pinkie Pie?

Well has been sane for a while now. Soo... non iussue

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What?

5400124 how many words this time you figure? 200k?....

So at the end, Twilight does foalplay with Celestia?


What about that Twilight replicant/golem/clone Celestia made?

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Twilight's clone is the one foalplaying, not the true Twilight. After all, I did state that the foalplaying Twilight had a "purple-greenish coat."

5405411 Does she have a name other than Twilight's clone?

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Nope. After all, that would take away immersion from Celestia's roleplaying.

ok , wow so THAT'S the route you want to take with this?
how will you even continue the fic from here?.....

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It's a one-shot.

5411178 oh, hadn't realized lol....

5411178 Ah, what a shame. But I guess that means we can now focus on the side series with Pinkie and Velvet.

Ow! Please Daxn! Can't you make a story with Twilight and Lex Poppuli? :fluttercry:

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I dunno what the plot would be, so... unlikely.

Nice! I loved Ab Initio-From the Start-Al Principio, and I'm glad to see a sequel.

um... this is all I got out...... Twi Etheral area... No alicorn..... Baby??????? Ta WHATT?

I will say that your writing is extremely sophisticated but you often skip over the basics.

Does this mean there was a "bad" end?

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I was not sure, as it say "Sequel to the bad ending" so I supposed that I missed something

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