In the attic of a huge mansion, three teenage humans were working on their high school project for their technical class. They decided to make a portal to a virtual reality world based on their favourite fantasy games. When they went into the portal for a test run, the portal closed behind them immediately without a way of return. Eager to get back in one piece, they had to start their adventure in this new world, by actually attending a virtual high school as secret defenders of the world from an upcoming threat.
Special thanks to Koekelbag and warewolves for the proofread
Chapters (11)
Um... Haven't read it yet but I already see a problem. The chapters only break the thousand word mark twice. To be fair, I have no idea what your writing style is, but just a thought; maybe combine all these chapters into one so people don't have to got to the next chapter after 2 minutes of reading.
5536577 Okay... Thanks for the feedback.
I'll try to make future chapters longer. These are just the beginnings so they tend to be shorter. The second reason is short because there's nothing more to elaborate about the title. Just hope you know what I mean.
i think this is a pretty cool idea for a story ^_^
5539553 Thanks. To be honest, this used to be a first person gary stu...
5539579 well i enjoy what it's become now :D
5539588 Appreciate it.
i getting so hype for a big fight :D
5550207 So? You want them to fight? :0
5551256 i mean like fight against a powerful villain :P
5552439 That will be coming soon...
5552481 yay!
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5561544 LOL
lol Applebloom
5645481 A reference from Dragon Ball Z
5647452 XD
MOAR
5669433 Gladly, coming soon.
IF YOU DIE IN THE GAME YOU DIE FOR REAL!!!!!
5917408 Or respawn
5919813 or that XD