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Ah miss ya...

Walk with Applejack as she shows you how she dealt with their beloved family dog's death.

Based on a true life story. Inspired when my family dog died. Not 100% accurate because my family is bigger and my family was moving a few weeks after my dog died. Not by choice though. We were going to move and then my dog died. I hope you enjoy.

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Emerald Harp

Emerald Harp #1 · Jan 9th, 2015 · 2 · ·

We are sorry about your loss bud. It really sucks whenever a pet dies.

In our opinion, the story is excellent. Had us tearin up several times.

SusieBeeca

SusieBeeca #2 · Jan 9th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Aw, this was sad. A few grammatical errors, but those are easily cleared up. The pacing seemed different in the first half than the last, though; the first seemed a bit rushed, whereas the last was longer. I'm not quite sure how to correct this, though, since we know the dog's dead from the get-go. Being run over would be rare in a land without cars (I know they have carts and carriages, but those wouldn't be as lethal), so more surprise from the characters would help the development. Hope this helps.

xXNeonShadowXx