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Darth Redbeard


It's almost harvesting season!

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This story is a sequel to Imperial Liberation of Equestria


Made for the MLP Fan Club Hearth's Warming Eve Contest


Spike's nerves are at an all-time high as he prepares for Sweetie Belle to arrive at the new castle for Hearth's Warming Eve. For the two of them, this will be a Hearth's Warming Eve they will never forget.
Will their relationship blossom or will what Spike has planned bring it down?

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 19 )

10/10 would read again

Three things: is the chapter's name a misspelling, or is it supposed to be "heat's warming"?
And thus just bugs me, "even the small town of ponyville was celebrating". That would suggest that it's surprising for ponyville to celebrate and that's not plausible in my opinion. And though the story is sweet, it's to fast paced. I'd say you should expand Spike's thoughts and feelings and the actual proposal. As for now, the center of the story is the food fight.

5403653 I forgot the r. My bad.
The main focus was the end. Food fight was just for fun.
Anyway, thanks for your opinion.

5403653 As for the fast paced, well, the contest required the story to be entered before the 21st and I entered late, so there was little time. And the other one shot to this I could've entered won't be out till the 24th.

5404381 Ok. Still thinks you should expand it.

5404400 I still have a another day or two. Shouldn't take long to expand it.

A nice little story it is. :twilightsmile:
Thank you for submitting it to our little hearts warming contest. We hope you enjoyed it and had loads of fun. :raritywink:

Dragon san:moustache:

5409689 thanks. I tried making a few last minute changes before the deadline. Oh well. this is what I call my best one.

5409702
It was neat. Don't worry none the rankings are still in the mix. :duck:

Dragon san:moustache:

5409815
No need for that. It was my pleasure reading so I should thank you. :ajsmug:

Dragon san:moustache:

5416965 thanks. You should also complement the author that's mentioned in the AN.

Im kinda confused i thought magnum belle "sweetie belle father" was working with the lennex empire along with pearl belle and disapprove of spike. Did they had a change of heart?:derpyderp1:

5558471 a later chapter in ILOE will explain that part, but I can't say here. Don't want any spoilers to anyone.

5558493 whoops i shouldnt have mentioned it. Sorry:facehoof:

5558728 I just said what will be explained. didn't say how. :ajsmug:

Wow this book is nicely done. I'm impressed.

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