Chapter five Griffon Reunion
Rainbow Dash flew as fast as she could to the griffon homeland griffonia her gauntlets had been repainted a darker shade of cyan with the wonder bolt insignia emblemed on them as she flew towards the griffon capital known as talon city. She just entered the city when a white and brown streak tackled her and pinned her to the ground.
"State your business intruder" stated a very familiar voice.
"I'm here to talk with your leader on behalf of princess celestia" said Rainbow dazed before she got a good look at her assailant.
"Gilda/Rainbow!" Said the two wide eyed as they stared at each other.
"Dash why are you here" asked Gilda surprised.
"Let's just say there's a emergency that's threatening the entire planet not just equestria" said Rainbow as her childhood friend helped her up.
"By the way this emergency of your does it have to do with those odd monsters appearing all over" asked Gilda.
"You just hit the exact reason. I have been ordered by Celestia to brief the ruler of the griffons about them and give a offer of a alliance to stop them" said Rainbow.
"Let me guess you were asked because you knew a lot about griffon customs from me" asked Gilda leading her friend to the building the king resided.
" Honestly I volunteered for that reason" said Rainbow.
"You wanted to patch things up with me didn't you" stated Gilda deadpan.
"Yeah I mean you were like a sister to me and after so long you changed and was a jerk to my new friends. After you left I wondered why you changed from the caring sister figure to someone I didn't recognize" sighed Rainbow.
"I did some reflecting after I left and I thought the same thing. It was petty of me to be jealous that you had other friends I mean I really hurt flutters feelings when you and I used to stand up for her back in flight school! I been meaning to come back and apologize for that but I been so busy I lost track of the time. I did follow your adventures though. You six were the Elements of harmony! Defeating and redeeming discord, the crystal empire, nightmare moon I thought that you were becoming way to awesome than I thought" said Gilda with a sigh.
"Gilda just so you know they forgave you. I learned that people change over time. Though maybe it would have been better if we kept in touch than that might not have happened" said Rainbow with a small grin.
"Yeah that might have been the preferable choice" said Gilda with a laugh.
They entered the building and Rainbow focused. The king of the griffons known as king steel talon looked up as the two entered.
"Hello daughter is this the friend you told me so much about? Nice to meet you but what is the nature of your visit" said king steel talon who looked a lot like Gilda only his right talon was replaced by a robotic limb ending in sharp metal talons.
"I am Rainbow Dash bearer of the element of loyalty, I'm here on Princess Celestia's orders to brief you about the current threat that Recently popped up" said Rainbow with a bow while inwardly was shocked that her sister figure's dad was the king.
"Ah yes those black monsters" nodded steel.
"They are called Heartless sire they are the physical manifestation of the darkness of a person's heart. Currently there is only a few weapons able to get rid of them permanently and I am currently wearing one. Princess Celestia has offered a alliance to combat this threat. The heartless have the ability to spawn more by consuming the hearts of those around them. Basically they can turn anything with a mind into more of them" said Rainbow.
"I see this does seem serious but how am I sure your telling the truth of these monsters" asked the king.
Suddenly one of his guards stumbled in with a black aura around him before darkness covered the griffon and when it receded in his place was a guardian robot heartless.
"I can see what James meant about tempting fate there" muttered Rainbow as she unsheathed her hidden blades and took to the air as she blitz past the heartless and glowing lines crisscrossed it before it became black smoke that released a red crystalline heart that vanished.
"My word! That was the proof I needed hurry and see if there are more of them" ordered the king now in a serious mood.
"Dash I'm going with this is my home and I'm not letting it get destroyed!" Said Gilda.
The two flew to the city and attacked the heartless and rallied the local guards to fight back. Once the city was cleared Rainbow panted as she sheathed her blades.
"Thank you for your help" said the king with a bow as Gilda nodded to her sister figure.
"I don't leave friends hanging besides this alliance needs to be seen" said Rainbow.
"Very well tell your princess that we shall join but on the condition you let my daughter lead the griffon soldiers as our representative general" said steel.
"I wouldn't have it either way" said rainbow.
"You best be on your way you two there is much work to be done" said steel as the two nodded and headed out.
"Gilda why didn't you tell me you were a princess!" Shouted Rainbow as they walked off making Gilda stammer in surprise as she tried to explain to her sister figure making the king chuckle before coughing out some blood.
"I don't have much time left Gilda I hope you can handle the responsibility your about to receive because I am proud you have such a caring friend. Good luck ruling in my stead my daughter" thought steel before ordering his military to prepare to head to equestria as they evacuate the nation just in case the Heartless come back. With his last order given he slumped into his throne and breathed his last.
King steel talon had died but his legacy shall rule the griffons as great as he was alongside her friends in equestria. But that is a tale for another time.
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5631427 one its like real life to my character so the rules from kingdom hearts don't apply, and two it has to do with the fact chrysalis is the one that I had to even activate the form. Plus with equestria being so full of ambient magic it is the gathering of that magic that allowed the spells. I played the game before using drives completely refills the mp and I had no trouble using spells in that form. Hope that answers that.
nice chapter! poor king though D:
Also happy birthday ^_^
5632700 bit late on the birthday thing I posted it on the twelfth but thanks anyway and glad you agree. King steel talon died from a decease that formed from his war wounds. He had the unfortunate luck of his organs starting to fail and losing his arm in his first war added blood loss into the equation. In other words his body was breaking down. He taught Gilda everything he knew so she can take over when he died. The heartless threat had forced him to push his body to far. He knew nothing could be done for him at that point and wanted to ensure his nation survived even though it had to be evacuated as the heartless would return to the nation. Frankly he died with no regrets knowing the future is safe in Gilda's talons. If you want to you can make a side story dedicated to him about what his life must have been like being the one to bring the griffons together and fighting to defend his people and raising his daughter after his wife's death by assassination. Frankly I'm terrible at wars like that but I definitely want to see the world I made here be expanded.
5633430 i wish i could write that story but i'm no were near skilled enough to D: maybe if i ever get the skill and some one else has not done it by then i will give it a try :D
How is that a bad thing?
You can look worse than Sora.
5647951 getting targeted by xemnas and xehanort and not to mention I could pull a convincing sora look a like at fourteen years old with only my green eyes to show I'm not him. You know how people use colored contacts to get their eye color right for costumes? Have you seen anyone manage to turn green eyes to blue with colored contacts! Frankly in this state in story I would be targeted to become xehanort's thirteenth vessel of darkness. I played dream drop distance to know my character will be a target for that. That's mainly the reason why I stated the mane six, the cmc, and spike have potential to be key bearers so they can act as a safeguard like riku did in dream drop distance for sora while they barely kept sora out of the orginazation's clutches. If I was to get a nobody his name would be jexmas or saxmej, or even semxaj! Frankly I got no clue what to call my nobody if I get one. I thought this through sky.
5668939 I thought l fixed those spelling errors from the auto correction function of my tablet. My laptop is on the fritz so a tablet is what I'm using for the story. Thank you for the info I will go fix them now.
5668241 Wow, easy. I didn't mean to offend, I was just saying you could look a lot worse than Sora. But I see your point, having Leonard Nimoy wanting to put something of himself inside you would be troublesome... That came out wrong
Forgive me but the thought of Spike or the CMC wielding keyblades sounds hilarious to me, Because they are so small xD (I can image Spike fighting like Yoda). I don't think your nobody's name would need to be an anagram of your name with an X, that something only Org.XIII did to their members if I got it memorized.
Also, good thing that you thought it trough, Keep up the good work Geo.
5670400 I think the anagram with a x might be needed as to them I am sora until they see my eyes. Yeah my nobody might get placed into the organization during the world hopping journey after twilight's kingdom and season five. By the way that season five trailer gave me a story of the blanks vibe.... guess I know how bloom is getting her keyblade now. But I still have a long way to go until then.
5673148 I see, true we can't know for sure if all nobodies name are an anagram of their original name with an X, as we only ever see those who are part of the Org.XIII (Aside from one).
I haven't see the season 5 trailer yet so...
5724863 I remember it now, thanks
After reading this, I noticed something. This story needs comas and capitalization. I recommend that you read over your story with a fine tooth comb and changeAll flaws with this. Also, run it by as many editors as you know until the problem is solved. This has the potential to become one of the greats, you just need to micro manage it after you pour your heart and soul into it. Before you say or think that I am mercilessly nitpicking this, I want you to know that I am telling you this because I care.
5762216 yeah I may have finished high school but I'm still learning about writing. If I ever want to be a book author I need to learn all I can about the trade. When I get to collage I plan to major in writing. It also help I write songs as a hobby at least the lyrics part. They double as poems a few times. I uh got sick of most of the recent songs I heard were about death and the like. I wanted to balance out that with more hopeful songs to keep people from trying suicide from the influence of those songs. Miley Cyrus didn't help with that one song involving cages. I may like Gothic music but those were going to far. Just look at Justin beber. Yeah you can say I try to vent out my thoughts and emotions about the world through my writing, it's my way of trying to not lose my temper. Being dutch Irish it's a improvement over how temperamental I can get. Though when I do lose it let's just say I'm not exactly easy to calm. Tea helps there. I can hold a major grudge for about two months at the least half a year at most. I really don't like my anger.
Hey, I suffer from anger as well. I usually channel it through writing a musical sheet and then I burn it. Oddly enough, I even found a song on YouTube that had music similar to mine. [youtube=WgjiGDO7_EA]
*SQUEEEE* Finally a Kingdom hearths displaced! wuhu way to go! cant wait to start reading... cause friking exam tomorrow and I am yet to open my book xD
5782798 I'm actually the first of three. The only other one I know is the story dropping in on a equestrian dream.
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I read the story, the plot is good, yet you can make it better by making the acts more long, like when you enter equestria.
He just fall in from the roof and nothing more, you can change that and put more words like when he meet Luna, he just said 'hi I am a alien' and luna says 'Hi', you could make it more hilarious or dramatic and make the story more breathtaking. But meh your story bro is awesome nonetheless /) *bro hoof*
I recommend that you finish the story and then If you like rewrite, don't change the story just make it longer. Like the moguri, it is kind of weird that they appear and live in equestria without twilight knowing it firsts hand, so you made the explanation a bit longer not just 'they come and he told us they where on our side'
P.S. Why cant I find my kingdom hearths for DS!!! the universe hates meeeee
it seems that I have to play Bravely Default...
5795208 well I couldn't do much on that bit with the meeting and it wasn't through the roof it was on the roof. The place is made of stone remember. And as I mentioned on the group threads for the displaced the merchant didn't aim on where to put me. So like the guy from the puppets of tradegty story I fell after appearing in the sky. Though mine was more painful as there weren't any trees to slow my fall down. Though I didn't get the keyblade at the time my clothes were already active with passive magic which allowed me to survive the fall. Barely. Anyway I rethought on my allowing crossovers date and decided to open up after recruiting the rest of the equestrian races. I'm already thinking up my message for my token.
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Try to make it epic :P