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"You're so vanilla!" "You're like the Fairy Bread of Australia!" Anonpencil - 2019


Twilight and Big Macintosh have been sneaking out of home and are usually gone all day.

Just what the hay are they up to anyhow?

Well Applejack and Spike are on the case, but is it really what they expect?

Written on a whim, pre-read by the amazing Cerulean Voice.

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Bloody fucking brilliant. This is inspired by that one comic someone made right? If not, I may want to slap you.

~Crystalline Electrostatic~

5392439 - I don't know which comic you might be referring to. But the one that inspired me is in my latest blog.

Thanks for writing this. I really got a laugh out of the comic, and you have done it justice. Well done sir. I really liked the secrets Pinkie mentioned, especially the coffee one. :pinkiehappy:

5392457 Yeah, that one. I couldn't remember who posted it, I wasn't sure if it was you or someone else.

~Crystalline Electrostatic~

you should continue this, I enjoyed it immensely.

5392469 - Thanks. I liked that part too!

5392558 - You know it~

5392564 - Hmm, maybe.

Cooling down by heating up. Sounds like a legit practice like hot yoga or something. :raritywink:

Priceless about the cool down exercises. Perfect. I loved it. Great job.

This was very cute! TwiMac is an old favorite of mine(usually prefer MacDash), so it's nice to see it done so well. AJ and Spike were also fun to watch. I was gonna upvote and leave, but...

“Well, I can look after myself” Spike felt the need to defend his big sister. He’d put two and two together here and he couldn’t be prouder. Twilight Sparkle was finally getting some!

That line right there earned you a fave. :rainbowlaugh:

Nice. Twilight and Big Mac got each other big time. I :heart::heart::heart: this story. Hope there is more coming. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

5392457 As soon as I saw this story, I knew what it was. Still, I loved it. Great job.

5393337 -Many thanks. I loved that line.

That was great, and ended exactly like I was hoping it would. And hooray for supportive brother Spike. :moustache::twilightblush:

5395048 - Spike doesn't get enough love. I seriously had fun writing this.

This is just plain adorable~ (I really need to do a few one shots now and again during my dry periods. Perhaps that Cadance/Chrysalis side stories could work.)
Twimac honestly doesn't get enough attention and I'm glad to see this here.

Yay new story! :twilightsmile:
No Twi and Kai though. :ajsleepy:

5395399 -Arigato:twilightsmile:

5395430 - I'm working on it. I have some serious writers block though...

At the end of the story, you suggest looking at the most recent blog post to see what you're talking about. The problem is, once you make a new blog post, it won't be the most recent, and after several more it becomes trickier to find. It might be easiest to simply link to it at the end of the story so that when new blog posts push it away, new readers can still find it easily.

5396266 - A great tip, such a problem is now rectified. Thank you~

That's fine. Writers block is tough.
I should not complain since you wrote this one. And by the way I LOVE IT! :pinkiehappy:

That was fun. . .:moustache::raritystarry::ajsmug::eeyup::facehoof:

5399573 - Glad you liked it.:twilightsmile:

Those two clever bastards at that very last sentence...

I don't know, I think the correct response from Mac here is "What business is it of yours what I do in my free time, you nosy bitch"?

Because seriously, this whole thing hinges on AJ and Spike being jealous, possessive stalkers who can't stand to let their "friends" have any free time or privacy. Good job, you wrote a story based on an unlikeable portrayal of half of its cast.

Twilight Sparkle was finally getting some!

I'd take a bet against that.

“Ah’m jus’ glad they didn’t show up during our ‘cooling down’ exercises…”

I fell for the double fake-out! CURSE YOU.

Well I must admit that you got me good. I was thinking they were doing it. Then I find out they weren't doing it. Then they have their cool down "exercises" hmm......sounds to me like there's more going on then they were telling. Great story by the way. You really did a good job of present the couple as well as making them believable, I love that you got Big Mac all upset at what spike and Applejack were implying they were going at it. The irony is that they are indeed going at it, only they weren't actually caught in the act. So does this mean Big Mac technically lied? I mean after all the truth is they are doing more then just magical tricks and what not. They are together in an intimate way. I suppose it gets murky here, after all they are doing both. I suppose sooner or later they will be found out and I would hate to be them if and when Applejack found out they were doing it when they were both sneaking off to "practice magic and wing spells". I think AJ would flip out and probably want to kill her brother and Twilight. I'd read the sequel if you wrote it and Applejack does find out what was actually happening. It'd be epic!!!

you should REALLY write more TwiMac. Not enough on this site.

5400137 Well to be fair, Applejack, at least as far as I'm concerned, has never been likeable. So... Yeah.

I remembered this, read it again and it is cute and funny as always.

As an aside, the comic this was based on? Yeah, I can't find it anymore.

8064700 You are officially a hero. :yay::raritystarry:

nice, I'm not a fan of TwiMac, but this is nice!

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