• Member Since 15th Dec, 2014
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joro


Hello, I am chiefly an Artist, trying to dabble in writing. Here for some fun! Go Tubers!

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Ponyville is in its heights of celebrating Hearth's Warming Eve, Applejack decides to go out with Big Mac and take in the sights. Unexpectedly AJ finds Twilight still in Ponyville, she's suppose be going home to her family! AJ wonders what is wrong with Twi' and wants to help.

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Proud to be your first thumbs up! I am happy to see you dabbling in my favorite style of art. :raritywink:

I must admit, I got a little teary-eyed at the end. Really, really good atmosphere, good dialogue, good emotion!

That was really sweet, very much the core of the holidays there. Thank you for sharing, I really enjoyed reading this. :pinkiehappy:

I did a see a small error towards the top if you're interested in fixing it, just an extra letter, nothing big.

They sure would love s this! she thought.

This was a charming little slice of life... Well done!

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