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Rainbow Dash walks into Carousel Boutique and asks Rarity out to breakfast.
Only...Rainbow Dash is acting somewhat...odd.
Concerned for her friend, Rarity spends the day with Rainbow Dash. But the bizarre new habit Rainbow Dash has developed quickly wears on Rarity's nerves...
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Doctor who comparison for the win.
Oh my god! This is so darling, darling! Quite the darling spectacle indeed, darling!
Eh. Felt a little lack luster
5384261 It WAS going to be a Pony Fail, but it ended up being over 1k words, so I decided to make it a separate short story.
Anyway, if you don't get the joke, look up G3 Rainbow Dash.
Rarity is going to get some payback.
I 
this story. Please make more. 
5384272
I actually collect the G3 ponies when I find them, I know the joke
5384316 Wait that was REAL!? I thought that was just pony info getting characters mixed up! She REALLY had Rarity's personality before!?
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5384362 Dear Celestia make it STOP! I couldn't go through the first thirty seconds before I muted it!
That was funny though. I got a kick out of it. I feel no sympathy for Rarity. Ever. they should totally put this in the show. You should make another for Twilight and Rarity getting back at AJ and RD! That'd be totally rad!
Darling!
Overall nice story. I feel like the only one who compare, Rainbow Dash (G3), and Rarity (G4) in the same voice the way they said 'Darling.'
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5384362
It's over but why do I still hear it?!
5384362 I feel like my IQ went down a butch after a minutes (and two seconds) of RD (g3) DARLINGS
5384265 Can I kill it with fire PLEASE
5384362 I feel compelled to write a story where Rainbow becomes cursed, and the only words she knows how to say are...
"Darling?" and "Darlings!"
5384425 You'll be hearing it for the rest of your LIFE, darling!
5384463 And "rainbows". That was her OTHER catchphrase.
5384362 Son of a B**** that's a lot of darlings.
...Kudos if you are a man and watched the whole thing like I did. Here's a secret to help you: imagine she's actually saying all of it in the same sentence, and trying to communicate through saying the same word over and over. It gets quite amusing.
5384401 *slow clap*
5384362
Sweet CELESTIA, why would someone MAKE that video?! As if G3 wasn't bad enough
Seriously though, I got a kick out of this little comedy. I also learnt that some fictional characters believe 'darling' is an adjective, darling.
5384507
Thank you.
5384343 You're following me? o.o That's...actually quite uplifting to know, but still, you haven't read either of my stories as far as I know, so...why? XD
It's been said before, but I'll say it again: this story is pretty much a pile of meh.
I did laugh once, but that's the only positive thing I have to say. (I can't remember what it was that made me laugh, even though it was just 5 minutes ago, but nonetheless, a laugh is a laugh.)
It's too quick which is largely to do with that fact that hardly any detail is given, and what little detail there is is given in a very straightforward and boring fashion. No spectacle, just an account of an event.
Throw in a metaphor or a simile or something, appeal to our senses, give us something to capture our imaginations.
As it is, it's just:
Rainbow Dash did a thing.
Rarity responded.
Rainbow Dash did another thing.
Rarity responded.
(Repeat a few times.)
End.
5384518 Darling CAN be used as an adjective, though. Such as "a darling child", or "a darling little hat".
This was moderately amusing. The best part, though, was how Rarity didn't say "darling" at all until the end. At least, in my opinion, darling.
5384564
True. Meh, my comment sounded better when you imagine it can't be used like that.
Heh, nice. Figured it was a prank on RD's part. Had been kind of hoping that Twilight had been in on it, just for the inevitable brain melt that would have happened there. Still, a cute result
The only suggestion I would have would be changing the final line every so slightly to
to better emphasize how Rarity feels about the whole thing. Perhaps italics on darlings as well, denoting an angry growl.
Either way, got a grin and a laugh, nice show. Oh, and the video is pure evil.
5384521 You're welcome darling! MWAHAHAHAHAHAAA!!
5384542 It's not supposed to be deep and emotional in the first place. It's meant to be a great big joke! XD
You might as well complain because a knock-knock joke has no setting!
It's just... I can't... Why did... I'm not....
I don't know why but the cover pictures got me tripping balls.
5384687 My qualm isn't that it's not deep. It's that it is written in a completely boring way. Writing (this includes writing in quick comedy stories) should convey more than just the essential information that advances the plot. There are no sentences in this story that make me think "Oh, that was a clever way of saying that!" They all just tell it like is.
Meh.
You usually knock me out with your comedies, Myth, maybe next time
5384401 RAINBOWS DARLING! RAINBOWS!
(Reads the first few lines.)
Nope.
5384362
Does each Darling have its own particular meaning?
As is in "I am Groot." or "Hurry, smurf the smurfy smurf is smurfing away in the smurf."
DAAAAAAARLING. THIS STORY WAS SIMPLY DAAAAARLING, DAAAAARLING.
Darling, did you notice that this darling story was featured? Simply darling, isn't it darling?
5384362 Oh dear lord
the story was already funny but it makes more sense now darling
5386029 Indeed, darling!
*Insert Darling joke, because you people are making better ones than I would in my entire, meaningless life*
*Insert comment about complimenting Moth's story*
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:D
Darling, this story was simply darling, darling!
DARLING!
AREN'T THE DARLING RAINBOWS JUST DARLING TODAY!?!JUST SIMPLY DARLING DARLING!
5384250
I be running.
5386712 You better... Rarity gunna get chu'...
Oh, darling. My head is now full of "darling" after reading that story, darling.
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I was going to write a comment about how "darling" this story was, but that's obviously not original, so I'll just go with this comment in the style of the Ugly Barnacle:
"Once there was an original comment: It was so original that NOBODY posted it! The end!"
That said, this is an awesome and hilarious story, simple and beautiful.