In the Equestria region, a young researcher named Twilight begins the next phase of her studies, only to be thrust into a life she didn't expect or want. She has been learning about Pokemon for as long as she can remember, from the very best, but now Celestia's pupil must embark on a familiar yet different journey, reluctantly making allies to stop the storm of chaos coming.
inspired by the art of SelenaEde
Another fic with this thumbnail?
Looks interesting. Deserves a track.
Watching and holding Spike and Twilight characters development is awesome. Or at least their pokemon.
Pretty good, will keep my eye on this one. Subtle Darkrai hint was subtle
Also, one small error:
"A young boy" maybe?
5417082 Thanks, and embarrassing typo was embarrassing
Gonna track this. Finally, someone doing an actual crossover based on Selena's artwork.
I'll be doing a threeway crossover of this myself. Can't wait to see what you do here.
Just read this. Now I'm going to actually follow it!
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Kinda like Ash's encounter with a Legendary Pokemon on his first day too.
In the next chapter or two is where Spike gets Peewee isn't?
5483621 Maybe...
lol. seems legit, my little pony.
5487107 What did you think of the battle?
5487281 could've been longer, but it's alright where it is
5487288 And what did you mean was legit?
5487316 the fact it's an MLP and Pokemon crossover, the first I've read here so far~
5487391 Well I hope you enjoy it so far, and the future chapters to come
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Well this is good. Loved how you kinda called back to the pilot but with a lot of Poke touch and new stuff to it.
I plan doing a story like this too. Do you have any advice? I already made a picture of the main character which is my OC.
Link to image
5524911 That depends. What do you want this OC to do? Where does he fit in? What is his goal? What will he do to achieve it? How does he get Mew?
So which pokemon is in the poke ball that Twilight has? Obviously you're not going to tell us, but I figured I might as well bring that up. I'm going to guess either Gastly or Abra.
5530305 I will say you're not far off
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Hmm...ooh, then it must be Haunter! Haunter (at least the one Ash had in the Anime) would seem like the pokemon to give young Twilight a hard time.
my series will be called My Little Pokémon: Heart. I have a description for my OC.
Here it is:
What do you think?
5534363 Like your description. Wonder who his sister is. Imagine if it was Harshwhinny.
Also, if you want more advice, you should find a group which offers advice for ideas and make a thread on one of those.
5535212 its actually cadence who is his sister if you read my other stories. and it is a good idea to make a thread. and if I may, I can PM you if I need help as well.
5535241 Sure, always willing to give advice to those who want it; PM away.
heywell you do MEGA pokemon is thi story?
5535776 There will be Mega Evolutions, yes.
5536024 which mega pokemon all of the mega that we know of or made up ones?
5536318 All canon, none made up.
5536426 ok
So, I'm guessing Spike obtains his Pokemon team throughout the story, right?
Also, there were a few parts that you and/or your editor may have missed.
5565788 Well they all more or less get their team throughout the story and I am not sure what you mean by parts I missed.
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Okay. Just wanted to know.
Here's an example:
I'm pretty sure you meant- "She stopped right next to them,"
There were a few other sentences like that here and there. Just thought it was worth mentioning.
I think you meant to say "then turn and gave it to" I noticed a few other minor errors, but this one was the first of the most glaring. Liking the story so far.
Yay!!! A new chapter!
Great chapter, except for one thing.
It's Phanpy not Phanphy.
Also, as soon as Ralts appeared, I knew it would become Twilight's Pokémon.
5667125 Okay, thanks.
And Ralts is pretty obvious even if you haven't seen Selena's art, I guess.
can't wait for the next chapter!!!
I really like this story hope to read more soon
5792983 wait! what? how?
the chapter! it disappeared!!!!!!!!
the end is nigh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So you're going with the setup the game has where a limit of four moves can be learned instead of the setup in the show where the number of moves a pokemon can learn has yet to have a limit defined. I can dig it.
I noticed a minor hiccup,
I believe you have a rogue M in there, it should probably look more like "Can you get these two to a Pokemon Centre"
5799524 Thanks. How's the gym battle by the way?
5800646 It's okay for a first gym match, personally I didn't see why the crowd was getting so excited. In my opinion you didn't show enough of the match, your descriptions of the fight seemed a little lacking to me. It didn't quite feel like a show for the audience, more like a slightly more descriptive skirmish, but that's just my take.
5800913Thanks for the criticism.
I imagined the gym to be like Roxie's in the anime. Since the Pokemon are still low- levelled then I didn't want to exaggerate the descriptions of the moves they learn at these low levels.
I think you meant to say "fact of the matter", I recommend you read through to see if you can find any other errors yourself. This was another fun read, I await the next chapter with great anticipation.
Celestia and Luna having Legendaries as party PKMN!? That's unfair. On a side note, though. I can imagine Cadence being paired up with Luvdisc and Shining Armor with Aegislash.
I liked that battle. I can only wonder who's Peewee's Pokemon counterpart...